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Writing - An Essay Is it better to visit places in your own country or a foreign country when you go on holiday? Nowadays, many countries are considered the best place to visit in the world because you can find them enjoyable aspects such as culture, nature, food and the most important their people that create a particular atmosphere not matter if it is your country or not. However, you will find advantages and disadvantages on them. If you are a person that has visited the most famous places in your country maybe you don't find them interesting and you are interested in visiting foreign tourist places or maybe you want to stay in a place where the culture is totally different. Unfortunately, some countries can be expensive the main reason is the currency, in comparison with the country that you live in. On the other hand, you can find different offers or discounts for the place that you want to visit. In my opinion, I consider that each country has characteristics and aspects that make to interesting, so you only need to explore them and discover which aspects you are interested in.

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Writing - An Essay

Is it better to visit places in your own country or a foreign country when you go on holiday?

Nowadays, many countries are considered the best place to visit in the world because you can find them enjoyable aspects such as culture, nature, food and--the most important--their people, that create a particular atmosphere not matter if it is your country or not. However, you will find advantages and disadvantages to both choices.

If you are a person that has visited the most famous places in your country, maybe you don't find them interesting, and you are interested in visiting foreign tourist places, or maybe you want to stay in a place where the culture is totally different.

Unfortunately, some countries can be expensive.  The main reason is the currency, in comparison with the country that you live in. On the other hand, you can find different offers or discounts for the places that you want to visit.

In my opinion, I consider that each country has characteristics and aspects that make it interesting, so you only need to explore them and discover which aspects you are interested in.
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Writing - An Essay

Is it better to visit places in your own country or a foreign country when you go on holiday?

Nowadays, many countries are considered the best place to visit in the world because you can find them enjoyable aspects such as culture, nature, food and the most important their people. that The people create a particular atmosphere not matter if it is your country or not. However, you will find advantages and disadvantages on them.

If you are a person that has visited the most famous places in your country, maybe you don't find them you might not find those places interesting. and If you are interested in visiting foreign tourist places, or maybe you may want to stay in a place where the culture is totally different.

Unfortunately, some countries can be expensive. tThe main reason is the currency, in comparison with the country that you live in. On the other hand, you can find different offers or discounts for the place that you want to visit.

In my opinion, I consider that each country has characteristics and aspects that make to them interesting, so you only need to explore them and discover which aspects you are interested in.

Great job! My comments are just suggestions that I believe would make your writing easier to read. I am not an expert.

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I personally rather explore my country as much as possible before I travel to other countries. There are so many places in US that are extremely amazing. Visiting each of the 50 states is my goal. However, it seems like it is cheaper to travel outside of the US for vacations sometimes. There aren't many all-inclusive resorts here. Also, my wife loves cruises so usually we spend our vacations traveling to different places on a boat.

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