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- Could you correct my English?I am studying English for TOEFL <s>ibt</s> (unknown word?) I would like to find someone who correct<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);"> </s>s corrects my English.Question<s>s</s>Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a long time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.AnswerIn my opinion, I prefer to live alone. <s>I have some</s> Here are my reasons<s>.</s> :First, I can learn how important money is. When we live with our parents<s> at home</s>, most <s>of</s> parents pay money for housing, water, and gas. Parents get <s>pay</s> paid <s>them</s> to work hard every day. Children don’t care about it because they think it is natural that parents pay for <s>them</s> everything. But they get to <s>know</s> learn about money when they live alone because there are no-one <s>people</s> who pay<s>s</s> for them. Then they cherish money, water, gas and so on. In my case, I have had a part-time job and earned money to pay for my apartment fee since I lived alone.Second, I can get a lot of skills which I can’t get at my parents’ home. For example, I was not good at cooking before I lived by myself, but I decided to move to another prefecture to go to university so <s>that</s> I started to live <s>at</s> in the apartment by myself.I didn’t have anyone who helps me <s>at</s> in the new place. It was a hard time for me to <s>suit for</s> adjust to a new life. However, I <s>am able to</s> can do laundry, cooking, driving, and so on. I am sure that people can do most of the things when they face the situation that they must solve by themselves.Third, I have a responsibility for everything I do. Children tend to depend on their parents during their stay at their parent’s home. Although the existence of parents is important and essential for them, sometimes it <s>bothers</s> interupts the growth of <s>their</s> children. So it is a good time for both parents and their children to <s>cheer</s> encourage <s>the</s> <s>growth</s> growing-up and be ready for their futures <s>lifes</s>.That is why I think that I want independence from my parents if I<s> have</s> get a chance to do it.0 votedMay 4, 20201
- Which facility should receive money from local authorities?It was recently announced that the government is going to invest extra money in the development of <s>the</s> local infrastructure. Therefore, the controversial issue has to be tackled whether developing the sports industry or recreation resources would be more beneficial for dwellers.Taking into account sports <s>centres</s> centers, not only are they undoubtedly helpful for keeping fit, but also for improving health problems. The earlier people start working out regularly the healthier they are in the future. Moreover, studies show that in cities with numerous sports centers average life expectancy tends to be higher.However, children and older people wouldn’t be influenced by an increasing amount of sports facilities due to their physical abilities depending on <s>the</s> age. Another drawback of choosing sport is that decades would pass before its impact would be considerable.From the other point of view, parks are vital for health, especially in <s>the</s> polluted cities. People are unanimous on the fact that each green area makes the number of people getting over their lung diseases increasing, as statistics suggest<s>s</s>. On the other hand, gardens might not substantially improve the whole ecological problems concerning air pollution in the city.Summing up the above points, it’s rather debatable which decision would be right to make. Nevertheless, investing in sports centers seems to be more useful for encouraging people to live healthy lives.0 votedMay 4, 20200
- What job would you like to <s>have</s> do after university? <s>w</s>hy? Why?I would like to work in the airport <s>as a person</s> at the Information Center. I have two reasons why I would like <s>want</s> to work <s>like that</s> there. First, I like to talk <s>with</s> to people. Moreover if I <s>have a</s> get the chance, I hope to have <s>a</s> conversation with foreigners in <s>he/she</s> their own languages. <s>Second</s> Secondly,when I had gone abroad,there <s>is</s> was a lot of <s>gentle</s> kind people who <s>tell</s> showed me the way. <s>So </s>I want to be like them. These are <s>the</s> my reasons why I would like to work in the airport as a person at the Information Center.0 votedMay 4, 20201
- My first business tripLast week, I went to Japan <s>for</s> on a business trip. That was my first time going abroad so I was worried <s>abit</s>. a bit Worried about my speaking and listening skills when communicated with foreign people. My co-workers and I came to one of the main plants of the mother company in Japan to research how to operate a new product with other teams from the Philippines and The United State. I was backward a bit at first but then my co-workers helped me catch up. We talked and laughed a lot at lunchtime. They were pretty friendly and had a good sense of <s>humour</s> humorSometimes, they spoke <s>fastly</s> fast and I misunderstood so I took it wrong.I sometimes answered incorrectly. Then I realized my mistake but I didn't <s>not</s> fix it. I felt awkward and still regret about not <s>fixed</s> fixing it to continue<s>d</s> the conversation. We had a small party in the hotel we stayed in on the last day of the trip. We all <s>had</s> made good memories, I guess<s>ed.</s>_____________I hope this helps! If you need assistance with your English writing skills, please feel free to contact me and book one of my English lessons.-Teacher Alicia0 votedJuly 3, 20191
- My favorite bakery in ShanghaiBao <s>shi</s> Shi <s>fu</s> Fu is my favorite bakery in Shanghai. An intern in the previous company I worked for gave me two pieces and<s> they</s> <s>did amaze</s> it amazed me. <s>And</s> Later I found <s>there was</s> a store <s>besides</s> beside the new company I work<s>ed</s> <s>in </s>at.I like the lemon flavor and egg tarts with a full bowl of cheese the most. The <s>source and</s> cheese melt in your mouth, with a perfect sweetness, unlike other brands. And the best <s>mate</s> companion for the dessert is hot kung fu tea. No worries <s>abou</s>t for your tummy.Just enjoy the moment and <s>ge</s>t keep energetic <s>for</s> to do exercises to keep fit. Live to eat well, not too bad. <s>Anyway we need awards to live on.</s> (this sentence does not make sense? what are you trying to say?)Hope this helps you, and if you need any assistance with your written English skills, you are welcome to book a class with me.-Teacher Alicia0 votedJuly 3, 20192
- Hello BoshiThanks for submitting this. Very nice email.Only a few mistakes: I have fixed it for you and rewrote it below:A letter to my friend JohnDear John,I am writing to tell you that at last I have found a new house and moved in with my girlfriend. Since I have changed my job and the new workplace is too far away from where I lived which means I would have to spend 3 hours for commuting if I didn’t move. So I started looking for a house near my new company and here we are.I have to tell you that we are both very satisfied with this new home. It is recently re-decorated and equipped with brand new electronic devices including air conditioners, a dishwashing machine, a fire alarm system and a water heater. My girlfriend is very happy because we don’t need to do any further decoration which definitely saves us a lot of money and the rent is really fair. Furthermore, there are two bedrooms with a spacy living room making this lovely house very suitable for us to live in. And I almost forgot to mention that we now have a 15-square-meter yard now where we can grow some flowers in the future.So why don’t you come and visit us this weekend and I can show you more details of this beautiful house. We can have a nice barbecue if the weather is good.Below are our new address and phone number. So feel free to give us a call ahead. By the way, it will take about 45 minutes to drive from your place to ours.Best wishes,Boshi.0 votedJune 13, 20191

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