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A letter to my friend John Dear John, I am writing to tell you that at last I have found a new house and moved in with my girlfriend. Since I have changed my job and the new workplace is too far away from where I lived which means I would have to spend 3 hours for commuting if I didn’t move. So I started looking for a house near my new company and here we are. I have to tell you that we are both very satisfied with this new home. It is recently re-decorated and equipped with brand new electronic devices including air conditioners, a dish washing machine, a fire alarm system and a water heater. My girlfriend is very happy because we don’t need to do any further decoration which definitely saves us a lot of money and the rent is really fair. Furthermore, there are two bedrooms with a spacy living room making this lovely house very suitable for us to live in. And I almost forgot to mention that we now have a 15-square-meter yard now where we can grow some flowers in the future. So why don’t you come and visit us this weekend and I can show you more details of this beautiful house. We can have a nice barbecue if the weather is good. Below is our new address and phone number. So feel free to give us a call ahead. By the way, it will take about 45 minutes to drive from your place to ours. Best wishes, Boshi.

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A letter to my friend John

Dear John,

I am writing to tell you that, at last, I have found a new house and moved in with my girlfriend. Since I have changed my job and the new office workplace is too far away from where I lived meant which means I would have to spend 3 hours for commuting if I didn’t move. So I started looking for a house near my new company and here we are.

I have to tell you that we are both very satisfied with this new home. It was is recently re-decorated and equipped with brand new electronic devices including air conditioners, a dish washing machine, a fire alarm system and a water heater. My girlfriend is very happy because we don’t need to do any further decoration which definitely saves us a lot of money and the rent is really reasonable fair. Furthermore, there are two bedrooms with a spacious living room, making this lovely house very suitable for us to live in. And I almost forgot to mention that we now have a 15-square-meter yard now where we can grow some flowers in the future.

So why don’t you come and visit us this weekend and I can show you around more details of this beautiful house. We can have a nice barbecue if the weather is good.

Below is our new address and phone number. So feel free to give us a call ahead of time. By the way, it will take about 45 minutes to drive from your place to ours.

Best wishes,
Boshi.
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Hello Boshi

Thanks for submitting this. Very nice email.

Only a few mistakes: I have fixed it for you and rewrote it below:

A letter to my friend John

Dear John,

I am writing to tell you that at last I have found a new house and moved in with my girlfriend. Since I have changed my job and the new workplace is too far away from where I lived which means I would have to spend 3 hours for commuting if I didn’t move. So I started looking for a house near my new company and here we are.

I have to tell you that we are both very satisfied with this new home. It is recently re-decorated and equipped with brand new electronic devices including air conditioners, a dishwashing machine, a fire alarm system and a water heater. My girlfriend is very happy because we don’t need to do any further decoration which definitely saves us a lot of money and the rent is really fair. Furthermore, there are two bedrooms with a spacy living room making this lovely house very suitable for us to live in. And I almost forgot to mention that we now have a 15-square-meter yard now where we can grow some flowers in the future.

So why don’t you come and visit us this weekend and I can show you more details of this beautiful house. We can have a nice barbecue if the weather is good. 

Below are our new address and phone number. So feel free to give us a call ahead. By the way, it will take about 45 minutes to drive from your place to ours.

Best wishes,
Boshi.
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A Letter To My Friend John

Dear John,

I am writing to tell you that I have finally found a new house and moved in with my girlfriend. Since I have changed my job my new workplace is too far away would have been far from where I lived which meaning I would have had to spend 3 hours for commuting if I didn’t move. So I started looking for a house near my new company and here we are.

I have to tell you that we are both very satisfied with this new home. It is recently re-decorated and equipped with brand new electronic devices including air conditioners, a dish washing machine, a fire alarm system and a water heater. My girlfriend is very happy because we don’t need to do any further decoration which definitely saves us a lot of money and the rent is really fair. Furthermore, there are two bedrooms with a spacious living room which makes this lovely house very suitable for us to live in. And I almost forgot to mention that we also now have a 15-square-meter yard now where we can grow some flowers in the future.

So why don’t how about you come and visit us this weekend? and I can show you more details of this beautiful house. We can also have a nice barbecue if the weather is good.

Below is our new address and phone number. So feel free to give us a call ahead. By the way, it will take about 45 minutes to drive from your place to ours.

Best wishes,
Boshi.

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