Could you correct my English I am studying English for TOEFL ibt. I would like to find someone who correct s my English. Questions Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a long time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Answer In my opinion, I prefer to live alone. I have some reasons. First, I can learn how important money is. When we live with parents at home, most of parents pay money for housing, water and gas. Parents pay them to work hard every day. Children don’t care about it because they think it is natural that parents pay them. But they get to know about money when they live alone because there are no people who pays for them. Then they cherish money, water, gas and so on. In my case, I have had a part time job and earned money to pay for my apartment fee since I lived alone. Second, I can get a lot of skills which I can’t get at parents’ home. For example, I was not good at cooking before I lived by myself, but I decided to move to another prefecture to go to university so that I started to live at the apartment by myself. I didn’t have anyone who help me at the new place. It was a hard time for me to suit for new life. However I am able to do laundry, cooking, driving and so on. I am sure that people can do most of things when they face the situation that they must solve by themselves. Third, I have a responsibility for everything I do. Children tend to depend on their parents during stay at parent’s home. Although existence of parents is important and essential for them, sometimes it bothers growth of their children. So it is a good time for both parents and their children to cheer the growth up and be ready for future life. That is why I think that I want independence from my parents if I have a chance to do it.