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Which facility should receive money from local authorities? It was recently announced that the government is going to invest extra money in the development of the local infrastructure. Therefore, the controversial issue has to be tackled whether developing sport industry or recreation resources would be more beneficial for dwellers. Taking into account sport centres, not only are they undoubtedly helpful for keeping fit, but also for improving health problems. The earlier people start working out regularly the healthier they are in the future. Moreover, studies show that in cities with numerous sport centers average life expectancy tend to be higher. However, children and older people wouldn’t be influenced by increasing amount of sport facilities due to their physical abilities depending on the age. Another drawback of choosing sport is that decades would pass before its impact would be considerable. From the other point of view, parks are vital for health, especially in the polluted cities. People are unanimous on the fact that each green area makes the number of people getting over their lung diseases increasing, as statistics suggests. On the other hand, gardens might not substantially improve the whole ecological problems concerning air pollution in the city. Summing up the above points, it’s rather debatable which decision would be right to make. Nevertheless, investing in sport centers seems to be more useful for encouraging people to live healthy lives.

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Which facility should receive money from local authorities?

It was recently announced that the government is going to invest extra money in the development of the local infrastructure. Therefore, the controversial issue has to be tackled whether developing the sports industry or recreation resources would be more beneficial for dwellers.

Taking into account sports centres centers, not only are they undoubtedly helpful for keeping fit, but also for improving health problems. The earlier people start working out regularly the healthier they are in the future. Moreover, studies show that in cities with numerous sports centers average life expectancy tends to be higher.

However, children and older people wouldn’t be influenced by an increasing amount of sports facilities due to their physical abilities depending on the age. Another drawback of choosing sport is that decades would pass before its impact would be considerable.

From the other point of view, parks are vital for health, especially in the polluted cities. People are unanimous on the fact that each green area makes the number of people getting over their lung diseases increasing, as statistics suggests. On the other hand, gardens might not substantially improve the whole ecological problems concerning air pollution in the city.

Summing up the above points, it’s rather debatable which decision would be right to make. Nevertheless, investing in sports centers seems to be more useful for encouraging people to live healthy lives.
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Yes, thank you. I was actually confused about this word.
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Privet Stacy. Very good. Just notice that centre/center depends on the country. They are both correct - you just need to decide who you are normally communicating with. There are actually many countries that use the "British English" spelling of centre. Regards, Simon.

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