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- Writing practice 1(Part2) Q : The growing number of overweight people is putting a stain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved . Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A : Nowadays, a growing population of overweight people is a problem on the health care system . Some people consider that the best way to solve these issues is to play more sports and exercises in school. I agree that the best way to prevent a growing population of overweight people.
This problem is cased virtually by the disorder of life habit except for other cases. Overweight people mostly dislike the act of moving the body like sport and exercise. So they have few habits such as that, moerover they don't have no sense of crisis about the current situation because they don't know a danger of overweight that leads to other illuness. However the introduction of physical education lessons may be the key that they get to improve their lifestyle or learn a risk of overweight.
Another factor of this problem is a mobile phone addiction. This also is involved with a disorder of lifestyle . These days the number of people who depend on mobile phone has quitely increased . Those who are caught this symptom tend not to exercise, and will finally become overweight. But the physical education lessons can give them a opportunity to know a fun of sport or exercise. Thus it leads to change their lifestyle.
In conclusion , the introduction of physical education can prevent other dangerous illuness like mobile phone addiction as well as overweight .
March 11, 201810 - 若者の時に、僕たちは責任がなくて両親や親戚、先生に物事を任せていた。50年前に人々は16歳ぐらいになってから自立が得て、お金をもうけ始めたり、家を買ったりしたが、現在では25歳になっても両親とともに住んでいて、生活面をちゃんと決めていないといけない場面が多い。50年前に人々は16歳ぐらいで教育を終わったが、今人々はだんだん大学や大学院に入って22歳まで教育を受けるという場面が多い。その結果、人々は責任を任せられるのが遅くなる。僕は一人暮らし、この国では家庭が全然少なくてペットさえ飼わないから、責任を持たないと感じる。だけど、年を取ればとるほどだんだん責任を持たないといけない。責任がなければ、大人らしくなくて、まだ若者として感じる。0 votedMarch 10, 20180
- Writing part1 (2) The bar graph illustrates eight concerns which affect government and businesses to deciside abpout environmental policy. In general, there is not an big difference between government and business in concerns without legislation and saving energy .
Firstly, in government legislation has the most influence at under 30% while has only 15% in business. However saving energy is the biggest concerns for business and account for over 25%. In contrast, for both government and business, health and safety regulation account for 5% ,the number is the lowest in all concerns.
Cost of recycling and public concrns for environment constitute nearly 15% for both business and government . Regarding the other components , costs relating to disposal account for 10% which is almost double that for business. Land property dealing for business constituent 10% which is double for government . There is a tiny gap concerning the importance they give to media comment both are around 10%
March 9, 201810 - IELTS Writng Part2 Q: In many countries today young people are forced to get a job which they are not suited to or passionate about.
What do you think may be the reasons for this?
What problems might this cause?
In many countries around the world, young peolpe are imposed to get a job which they have no aptitude for, do not want to do. There are two reasons about it.
The first reason is lack of tertiary education institution. In some countries, there are limited places where are tertiary education . Young people who were not be able to enroll at the institution of their choice can not help studying a subject which does not interest them, or which is poor match for their skills and aptitudes. The other reason is parental aspiration for their children . Parent makes their children work a place that have prospects like social success, security and money in the future. Their parents encourages them to study and to go to university that their friends and relatives are proud of. Therefore the skills and needs of children tend to be ingored.
Some children who accomplished every difficulty imposed can not help working in the place where they do not want to do or their skills and aptitudes are not suited. And then they continue to work without finding rewarding, so they can suffer from job stresses and have a disatisfaction. They have a risk that lead to physical and psychological illuness. This affects their quality of work and a society as a whole.
In conclusion, a person who is pushed into uncongenial work because of social constraints or family pressure is not likely to be a productive and happy member of society. We need to ensure that individual talents and skills are recognised and catered for if we are to have a harmonious and well-developed society.
March 4, 201810 - IELTS Writing Part1 This bar chart illustrates the proportion of men and women who taught in seven different faculties of a particular university in 2012. The figures saw various fluctuation in seven different faculties which dominated by either sex, and more even distribution between genders in others.
Firstly ,most men taught as academic staff in seven different faculties that is engineering , whose figures stood at over 80% . In contrast , only about 15% of teachers in engineering were women. This figure is the lowest among seven faculities in women. But over 70% of women taugh in education.
However other faculities were balanced in thier composition. In medicine ,gender percentage were almost equal. Moreover business and science had a same proportions of me and women. In art, slightly more than half the academic were women while more than half the teachers were men in law.
March 3, 201810 - IELTS writing 2 The pie chart describes the proportion of energies used in a typical Australian household. In general, there are energies used which are “ heating and cooling’’ , “ water heating’’, “ fridges and freezers’’ , “lighting’’, “ cooking”, “standby power’’ and “other appliances” as a household energy in Australia.
Heating and cooling accounts for 38% in all household energy. It is the biggest proportion, followed by water heating accounts for 25%, other appliances accounts for 16%. And then fridges and freezers accounts for only 7%, same as lighting. Cooking energy is only 4%. Standby power comprises a remarkable 3%.
The table shows a single person uses 5000 to 6500 kWh per annum whereas two persons’s energy usage is a similar amount or not much more. Six or more persons uses the highest 16000 kWh while three persons’s usage is 7500 to 10000 kWh.
February 20, 201830 - IELTS writing The line graph illustrates the growth of population in India and Chine from 2000 to 2050 with a prediction.
Firstly Chinese population stood at 1,25 billions in 2000. This numbers continued to increase gradually. It is guessed to peak at 1,45 billions in 2030, it will decline slightly to 1,4 billions.
Secondly Indian population stood at 1 billion. It has began to rise since 2000. This number is estimated to exceed at 1,45 billions in 2030, at this point, Indian population will be more than Chinese population. Finally it will have increased to 1,6 billions in 2050.
As a whole, at the moment Chinese population is more than Indian. However, it is guessed that it will be reversed. And Chinese population will increase in 2050 compared to its population in 2000. Indian population will be more than twice in 2050 compared to its population in 2000.
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