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IELTS writing The line graph illustrates the growth of population in India and Chine from 2000 to 2050 with a prediction.

Firstly Chinese population stood at 1,25 billions in 2000. This numbers continued to increase gradually. It is guessed to peak at 1,45 billions in 2030, it will decline slightly to 1,4 billions.

Secondly Indian population stood at 1 billion. It has began to rise since 2000. This number is estimated to exceed at 1,45 billions in 2030, at this point, Indian population will be more than Chinese population. Finally it will have increased to 1,6 billions in 2050.

As a whole, at the moment Chinese population is more than Indian. However, it is guessed that it will be reversed. And Chinese population will increase in 2050 compared to its population in 2000. Indian population will be more than twice in 2050 compared to its population in 2000.

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As a whole, At the moment, the Chinese population of China is more larger than the Indian population of India. However, it is guessed predicted that it this situation will be reversed by 2050. And While the Chinese population of China in 2050 will increase in 2050 compared to its population in 2000, the Indian population of India will be more than twice double in the same time frame 2050 compared to its population in 2000.

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Secondly Second of all, the Indian population of India stood at 1.0 billion in 2000. It but has since begun to rise since 2000. This number is estimated to exceed at 1.45 billions in by 2030, at this which point, the Indian population of India will be more larger than the Chinese population of China. Finally, it will have increased to 1.6 billions in by 2050.

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The This ("The" is okay here, but I think "This" is better in this case) line graph illustrates the predicted population growth of population in India and Chinae from 2000 to 2050 with a prediction.

Firstly First of all, the Chinese population of China stood at 1.25 billions in 2000. This numbers has continued to increase gradually. It is guessed estimated to peak at 1.45 billions in 2030, but it will decline slightly to 1.4 billions by 2050.


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IELTS writing

The line graph illustrates the predicted growth of the populations in India and Chinae from 2000 to 2050 with a prediction.

Firstly The Chinese population stood at 1,25 billions in 2000. This numbers continued to increase gradually. It is guessed predicted to peak at 1,45 billions in 2030, and then it will decline slightly to 1,4 billions.

Secondly In 2000, the Indian population stood at 1 billion. It has begunbegan to rise since 2000. This number is estimated to exceed at 1,45 billions in 2030, and, at this point, the Indian population will be more than the Chinese population. Finally, it will have increased to 1,6 billions in 2050.

As a whole, aAt the moment, Chinese population is more than the Indian population. However, it is predictedguessed that this it will be reversed. And  The Chinese population will increase in 2050 compared to its population in 2000. The Indian population will be more than twice in 2050 compared to its population in 2000 in 2050.

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