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IELTS writing 2 The pie chart describes the proportion of energies used in a typical Australian household. In general, there are energies used which are “ heating and cooling’’ , “ water heating’’, “ fridges and freezers’’ , “lighting’’, “ cooking”, “standby power’’ and “other appliances” as a household energy in Australia.

Heating and cooling accounts for 38% in all household energy. It is the biggest proportion, followed by water heating accounts for 25%, other appliances accounts for 16%. And then fridges and freezers accounts for only 7%, same as lighting. Cooking energy is only 4%. Standby power comprises a remarkable 3%.

The table shows a single person uses 5000 to 6500 kWh per annum whereas two persons’s energy usage is a similar amount or not much more. Six or more persons uses the highest 16000 kWh while three persons’s usage is 7500 to 10000 kWh.

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IELTS writing 2

The pie chart describes the proportion of energyenergies used in a typical Australian household. In general, the energy used is categorized asthere are energies used which are “ heating and cooling’’ , “ water heating’’, “ fridges and freezers’’ , “lighting’’, “ cooking”, “standby power’’ , and “other appliances.” as a household energy in Australia.

Heating and cooling accounts for 38% ofin all household energy. It  makes upis the biggest proportion, followed by water heating accounts at for 25%,  and other appliances accounts at for 16%. And then Fridges and freezers accounts for only 7%, same as does lighting. Cooking energy is only 4%. Standby power comprises a remarkable 3%.

The table shows a single person uses 5000 to 6500 kWh per annum whereas two persons’s energy usage is a similar amount or not much more. A group of six or more peoplepersons uses the highest  amount, at16000 kWh,  while three persons’s usage is 7500 to 10000 kWh.

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PART 2

The This table shows demonstrates that a single person uses 5000-6500 kWh per annum whereas two persons’s people energy usage is consume a similar amount of energy, or if not much a little more. Households of six or more persons people uses consume the highest most energy at 16000 kWh, while whereas a household of three persons’s usage is people consume 7500-10000 kWh.

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PART 1

The This pie chart describes the proportions of energies energy used consumption in a typical Australian household. In general, there are energies energy is used which are for “heating and cooling,’’ “water heating,’’ “fridges and freezers,’’ “lighting,’’ “cooking,” “standby power,’’ and “other appliances” as a household energy in Australia.

Heating and cooling accounts for the largest proportion of all household energy consumption at 38% in all household energy. It is the biggest proportion, followed by water heating accounts for at 25%, other appliances accounts for at 16%, And then fridges and freezers accounts for only at 7%, same as lighting at 7%, and cooking energy is only at 4%. Finally, standby power comprises a remarkable only 3% of household energy consumption.


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