Characteristics of a good neighbor

Home is the place in which where we spend most of our life. It is the place that gives us the feeling of safety and comfort. In my view, what that makes this place so wonderful is having good neighbors, and there are two main reasons for this.

First, good neighbors are quiet. They take care about the peace between of neighbors. For example, ten years ago we lived in a one floor house on Jomhuri street. One of our neighbors had three naughty boys. Every afternoon, they started played football in the alley, making most of the neighbors were angry and upset. We could not take a nap or rest because of their noisy football matches. After a while, we left that house because my mother suffers from migraines, and she was very annoyed during those months. Our new house on Imam Jome street was great. Our new neighbors were nice and quiet.

Second, a caring neighbor will make your life fantastic. For instance, one month ago, one of my neighbors called me when I was driving to work. She told me that I left the garage door open. I turned went back home and I saw that it  to find out she was right. My remote control of for the garage door had went  ran out of battery, and the door was open. I was so thankful to my neighbor not only for calling me, but also for waiting beside the door until I returned. I was so lucky that nothing was stolen from my house. I invited her and her family for dinner in order to thank her for what she did for me. She was a very kind woman and she told me that we should be being nice to each other, and that is what makes our lives beautiful.

In sum To conclude, I like to have good neighbors. We are living in a big society where that we should have each other’s back. In my view, having a nice, caring, and quiet neighbor makes our house a prefect place.

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English Course

I have a friend, and her name is Enda. She speaks English very well. Once upon a time, she created an English course that was near from my house. She had created some great methods to understand English faster. The English course was proposed to University students and employee classes. She named her English course "Darco". I think it's a pretty cool name. Honestly, I hope that I can do the same thing as her. But, I know that my English is not as good as hers.

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In the virtual world

According to what I know, if people are living in a virtual world, they may be happier than in the real world because they suffer and have tough experiences in the real world. Along with the modern advancement of the Internet, an increasing number of people are depend on the Internet. If you over-indulge in the virtual world of the Internet, this may cause a string of problems for yourself. For example, more and more students and adolescents are addicted to virtual gaming worlds, which prevents them from concentrating on their studies. Furthermore, some people become so addicted to the virtual world that they begin committing crimes. Although the virtual world can make us feel happy and comfortable when we are suffering terrible things, coming back to the real world will remain disappointing. Therefore, we should live in the real world so that we can have a better life in the future.

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Here's a new panting that my son made.

He is 4 years old, and he takes painting class every Thursday.

It's shows fireworks, the moon, a plane, a tree, a bridge, and some buildings. The fireworks are beautiful and illuminate the sky.

One day, I asked him, "If one day, mom is not around you, how do you do?"

My son said, "I will miss you very much, and I will send you a flower when you come back."

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Today I have a hangover, but I need to study so hard.

Now, I am writing with a hangover, because yesterday I drank too many beers. But today will be good day, it is very hot and I can see the ocean is very calm. Near my house, there are a lot of boats, because I live close to the port, and some boats are waiting just outside the port. Maybe this evening I will take a boat, because I want to go to other island to visit my family. But for now, I am studying English and statistics very hard.

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Corrections:

Even  Although the era of information has come began long ago, and now people would rather watch a film or explore a virtual reality world in a videogame, I am one of those someone who proudly maintains that reading is not only an amusing past-time but it is also the most thought-provoking option. [Quite a very long first sentence, but you did a nice job compounding it. If you can think of a way, try dividing it into two?] Perhaps people do not read enough because they have not discovered which genre they enjoy the most. Therefore, I am going to propose my two favorite genres, which are my favourites, in an attempt to encourage reading. 

On the one hand we have the most famous genre, fiction, the king of the library, which copes all most of the top-sellers lists ever done. Whereas, films and video games that portray fictional stories are rather short and can only able to skim the topics. Books, on the other hand, with their obligated calm path dare to go much deeper and will provide a better framework for the story that will make it way stronger and memorable. In a society in which where everybody rushes everywhere around and no one pays much real attention to anything anymore, taking some minutes away from the hustle and bustle of modern life by reading fiction will help you to stay sane.

On the other hand, we have an arguably even more important genre, history. One might ask: "why is it more important than staying sane?" Well, as we have already established in the first lines, we are in a brand-new era. Unknown problems and conflicts arise worldwide and sometimes it seems like we are going to repeat old mistakes. I would like to make a call to our leaders, and say, "please, read more history!"

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Good day for conversation

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I have started to learn English. So, I want to meet for conversations on different topics.

My native language is Russian, so I can help you with it if needed.

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