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Michelle
New panting Its a new panting by my son

He is 4 years old ,he taking painting class every Thursday .

Its about the fireworks ,there have the moon,a plane ,a tree ,a bridge and some buildings ,the fireworks are beautiful and illuminated the sky.

One day, I asked : If one day,mom is not around you,how do you do?

My son siad: I will very miss you and I will send you a flower when you come back.

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It's a new painting by my son.

He is 4 years old. He takes painting class every Thursday.

It's about fireworks. There is the moon, a plane, a tree, a bridge and some buildings. The fireworks are beautiful and illuminate the sky.

One day, I asked : If one day mom is not around you, how will you be?

My son said: I will very much miss you and I will send you a flower when you come back.

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Here's a new panting that my son made.

He is 4 years old, and he takes painting class every Thursday.

It's shows fireworks, the moon, a plane, a tree, a bridge, and some buildings. The fireworks are beautiful and illuminate the sky.

One day, I asked him, "If one day, mom is not around you, how do you do?"

My son said, "I will miss you very much, and I will send you a flower when you come back."

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New panting

This is a new painting by my son.

He is 4 years old and is taking a painting class every Thursday .

The painting shows  fireworks.  In the picture, you can see (or "in the picture, you can see...") a moon, a plan , a tree,a bridge and some buildings.  The fireworks are beautiful and illuminatethe sky.

One day, I asked my son,  " If one day, mom is not around, what would you do?

My son said, "I will  miss you very much and I will give you a flower when you come back."


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