Presentation script - Tesla coil- (Introduction and Background)

When the practical application of electricity was still in its infancy, two scientists were in confrontation to have the world adopt their preferred method of transmission . Those two scientists were Thomas Alva Edison and Nicola Tesla.

Edison recommended pushed for the world to adopt direct current, but Tesla recommended preferred exchange current．

Today, exchange current is the mainstream method by which power is transmitted.method you know．For this reason, I’ll talk about the Tesla coil which became the reason for recommending exchange．

Presentation script - Tesla coil - (Introduction and Background)

When the practical application of electricity was thriving, two scientists were disagreed with the transmission method. They are Thomas Alva Edison and Nicola Tesla.

Edison recommended favored direct current, while Tesla recommended alternating current．

Today, alternating current is the mainstream for power transmission method you know. So, I’ll be talking about the Tesla coil, which became the reason for recommending exchange．

Presentation script - Tesla coil- (Introduction and Background)

When the practical application of electricity is thriving was first theorized, two scientists were in confrontation with the transmission competing against one another to find the dominant method. They are were called Thomas Alva Edison and Nicora Nikola Tesla.

Edison recommended direct current, but Tesla recommended exchange alternating current．

Today, exchange alternating current is the mainstream for power transmission method you we know．So next time, I’ll talk about the Tesla coil, which became the reason for recommending exchange method behind alternating current.

As pointed out by another corrector, you've picked a rather advanced topic for discussion. I confess i had to think rather more carefully than i normally would when giving my answers. A very impressive topic, i hope my notes aid you in some small way. Keep up the good work.

Presentation script - Tesla coil- (Introduction and Background)

At a time when there was a big push to develop practical applications of electricity (this gets your meaning across, though I'm sure someone could come up with a more elegant way of saying it) When the practical application of electricity is thriving, two scientists were competing for the adoption of in confrontation (it's actually pretty hard to think of a good way to say these sentences, because they are pretty dense) with the transmission method they developed. They are were Thomas Alva Edison and Nicora Nikola Tesla.

Edison recommended direct current, but Tesla recommended exchange alternating current．

Today, exchange alternating current is more prevalent mainstream for power transmission method you know．So, next time I’ll talk about the Tesla coil, (<- added comma.  Needed because you combined two sentences here) which became the reason driving force behind the adoption of for recommending exchange alternating current．

-Wow, pretty advanced topic.  This is tough to correct because at this level you aren't just trying to get meaning across, but also say things elegantly and concisely.  So each person would have a different opinion on how they would word it.  Anyways, good work, very impressive, and keep up the hard work.