Could you help me correct my sentences.

1, the thing that embarrasses me most is I went into a wrong room in the hotel in on all my trips.

2, what embarrasses me most is I went......

3, the thing that makes me embarrassed most is I went...... (you could also use "the most" in this and the above sentences)

4, the thing that surprises me most is Tom can do many things on his own without asking for help.

5, what surprises me most is Tom......

6, I like Tom the most in out of all my students. ("out" is optional, however, it is used most often in sentences like this).

7, I don't believe what Tom said the most among them three. (I would say "I don't believe that Tom speaks the most among the three of them.")

8, Lily is the one I don't like the most. (I would say "Lily is the one I least like" or "Lily is the one I like the least")

Note: sentence 1#, 2# and 3# mean exactly the same thing?

I cannot wait for the to travel

I am going to go to Hollywood on March 16th and 17th. I will visit two movie studios using the train, Metrolink. I have heared heard that most people use their own cars and the public transportation system is not so (so is fine to use, but using "as" is more natural) developed in L.A. I am a little nervous about if (this is also fine and makes sense, but more naturally is to use "whether" instead of "about if") I can get to them on time. Anyway, I cannot wait two days before my travel to America.

Great work! If you speak as well as you write, you will do fantastic. You are right. People drive everywhere and public transportation does not link you to every place you may want to visit. Using Uber is great. One good side of public transit is it may be quicker since so many cars on the road adds to the traffic problems. Have a great trip!

Outcomes of living in large apartment blocks

In today's world, many people are living in large connected buildings. It is argued if such a trend has more advantages or drawbacks (I would say, "People argue that this trend has advantages and some argue it has drawbacks"). From my perspective, I truly find that living in large buildings has have more advantages, especially, in terms of security and social activities.

One key positive outcome of a large building is the well controlled security. This is because usually such living environment is secured through access codes, security guards, and surveillance cameras. Additionally, advanced safety techniques may be implemented like fire alarms and anti-theft insurance. However, this is was not the case as for me in London last year, when a fire gone went wild in a multistory building and, as a result, many people were hospitalized with multiple injuries including burns and respiratory problems.

Indeed, recreational activities are amongst those social patterns among the social advantages that are provided by living in large buildings. Usually, people who share the same building block gather to share precious moments or celebrate certain events like Christmas or Halloween. Furthermore, such huge buildings are often provided with sports facilities which deemed essential for people who would like to be healthy and physically fit.

Great job. Keep it up.

Finally, I decided to start reading an English book

Today I started reading a book in English. I must admit I am so too (this is more natural) lazy to read, but I thought it's time to improve my English to become fluent and acquire more vocabulary (I am going to start watching a TV series, too). I came across with a lot of words that were unknown to me, so I wrote them down in a list to go back to them if I read them in future chapters and don't remember their meaning (this sentence makes sense to me but is a little confusing - I rewrote another way of saying it down below). I also downloaded the Spanish translation of the book to check expressions that cannot be translated literally. If you have any method to suggest me when reading, please tell me so that my reading improves.

Thanks!

I came across a lot of words that were unknown to me, so I wrote them down in a list to return to (go back to). Thus, when I read the words in future chapters and do not remember them, I have them written down. 

This is just one way of many ways to make it sound more natural.

Great job!

The first sentence is correct. It means that you go out to exercise and run in the mornings. The first part of the second sentence does not make any sense in context with the second half. "To go to a run" would usually mean to go watch someone else run, perhaps at a track and field race. In that sense, "to go to a run" would make the word run a noun rather than a verb. You are going to see an event that is labeled "a run". When you yourself exercise by running, you "go for a run" and not "to a run". However, if you take the article "a" out it can be correct. You can "go to run" (properly, it is stated as a future event as "I am going to run" or "I am going running") and it means the same as "go for a run". Hope this helps and is not too much to process. Good luck on English.