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    我今天买的笔记本

    这个笔记本是今天买的。我很喜欢它。它非常漂亮。

    我从来没看了笔记本一样。(Do you mea : I have never seen a notebook like that? = 我从来没见过像这样的笔记本)

    我打算在这儿用汉字写我的主意。也打算写我的问题和意见。

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    July 30, 2017
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    婚礼的祝福

    大家好!
    我是思黎,杨阳的好朋友。

    我跟她是在西安外国语大学见过面,她很热情地邀请我去她的家乡吃饭。(显示好玩的照片)
    杨阳是一个精彩(精彩 is usually describe thing, not people.)的女孩 – 很漂亮,很聪明,很有雄心,很有趣 – 也有很多梦想!
    她的一个梦想就是找到她的完美的王子! Wayne - 我想她找到了你。:)
    祝你们新婚快乐! 祝你们拥有(congratulate to be/do sth.  )无尽的爱,很多孩子!
    在我的国家,欧洲斯洛伐克,一个女孩离开父母的时候,她告别时候唱这首歌:
    .......(唱斯洛伐克的歌)

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    July 29, 2017
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    你可以查一下吗?(查 = search, 检查 = check)

    大家好!我叫孙伊娜。我二十一岁了。(GOOD)

    我是大一学生住的在南京。(我是一名住在南京的大一学生) (subject (我) + be(是一名) + adverbial of place(住在南京) + object (大一学生))。

    少一年前,(less than a year ago = 不到一年前),expend:more than a year ago = 一年多前 

    我开始学习汉语。 五个多月以后,我决定通过HSK四级。(GOOD)

    这段时间我发现了"refresh course", 这教程帮我很多了。

       我得知我的成绩后,那使我很高兴了。(In this sentence, the subject of the former part is 我(me),the subject of the later part is 那(refer 我的成绩),it could not exist more than ONE subject in ONE sentence.You could say: 我得知我的成绩后,我很高兴。Then omit the same part  (我) = 我得知我的成绩后很高兴)。

    所以我下决心课程还再一次。

    我不可惜(feel pity about what? ),

    因此我认识了不少努力的还天才的人们。

    他们刺激(inspire with confidence; give hope or courage to = 鼓励,激励)我不要放弃,继续研究。

    我希望我们都会考上HSK五级还有很好的分数。加油!

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    July 28, 2017
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    我住在俄罗斯

    大家好!
    我现在想介绍你们我国的天气。(Now, I want to introduce your weather in our country= 现在,我想向你们介绍我国的天气)

      NOTE: 向.某人.介绍.某物/某事

    我住在俄罗斯,也在大学学习外语。

    我们有四个季节:秋天,冬天,春天和夏天。

    (When you introduce weather to people in Chinese,the order is usually as :春,夏,秋, 冬 )

    人(It's better to change 人 into 人们,cause 人们 is used more commonly)想俄罗斯冬天太冷,

    但是冬天在这人不是冷的= But in winter, people is not cold here.

    但在这,冬天人们是感觉不到冷的= But in winter, people feels not cold here.(People is not cold, People FEELS cold)

    我很喜欢俄罗斯秋天,我们在这个季节有多叶子和风。我很想认识中国季节。你们可以告诉我你国的天气吗?(GOOD)

    再见!

    Hope there're no too many mistakes. x)

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    July 20, 2017
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    我的介绍,我的工作

    大家好,我是图书馆理员,

    在洛杉矶(美国)。in LA, you should add a VERB(ing),such as 住在洛杉矶/living in LA. Because  在洛杉矶 is just a prepositional phrase, it has no complete meaning.

    我洛杉矶住了五年。我的图书馆在一所小大学。在我的大学,他们教建筑,动画,电影制作等等,所以我们的书非常丰富多彩,有趣!我是系统图书馆员,所以我负责系统,目录,图书馆网站,和电子数据库。我爱我的工作,因为每天会学习新东西,我会帮助学生。你们有访问图书馆吗?你们使用图书馆吗?(VERY GOOD)

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    July 20, 2017
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    練習...

    我叫Cana. 你叫什麼名字?我的媽媽叫Eris。(GOOD)

    我的出生爸爸叫Andreas。

    Note: Usually, when you say 爸爸,妈妈 in Chinese, it it acquisece that they are your natural parents(亲生父母or 血缘父母) (blood relationship )    

    I  didn't mean to offend you, do you mean Andreas is your stepfather (继父) (the husband of your mother by a subsequent marriage)

    我的媽媽有一個孩子。我的出生爸爸有五個孩子。(GOOD)
    我有兩個哥哥,一個弟弟,還有一個妹妹。我沒有姐姐。我是我們家的大姐。(GOOD)

    If my explanation doesn't make you understand,pls contact me.  :)

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    July 18, 2017
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    What I like and don't like (Chinese)

    我讲我喜欢什么。我喜欢学习外语,我认为它有意思。我还喜欢做​菜​。我喜欢吃饭。我不吃肉和鱼,但是我喜欢蔬菜。(GOOD)


    我不认识中国菜("认识" is often uesed with person eg: 我不认识他(I don't know him), "熟悉" is often used with thing, 我不熟悉中国菜).

    但是我想去中国和常常中餐(Do you mean you often eats Chinese dished ? 我经常吃中餐)。

    我们有中国菜在捷克,(ENG:We have Chinese food in Czech)

                                                 (CH:在捷克我们有中国菜)

                                                 NOTE: In Chinese, we put SUBJECT at the END of the simple sentence.

    但是我认为它不是真的中国菜。(GOOD)

    我喜欢旅行。我不喜欢画画,因为

    我不会画画很好。(CH :我画不好 or 我画得不是很好)

                                       (我不会画画 means I can't draw, 我画不好 means I'm not good at drawing.)

    我喜欢唱。(I like singing = 我喜欢唱歌, 唱 is a VERB, 唱歌 is a NOUN,  often“ 喜欢+ NOUN” )


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    July 16, 2017
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    Asking if there's a special event on

    Hello, I want to ask a cafe that frequently do special events if they have a special event on between the 5th and the 13th of September, would this be correct?:

    你好!
    對不起, 我是英國人所以我的中文不太好了。
    從9月5號到9月13號你們在做特別活動嗎?
    非常感謝你!

    Thank you very much

    Hello, I want to ask a cafe that frequently do special events if they have a special event on between the 5th and the 13th of September.

    你好,我正在寻找一个在九月五号到十三号之间做特别活动的咖啡馆。

    NOTE: Chinese put SUBJECT at the end of the sentence.

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    July 15, 2017
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    薄弱性别 (The Weaker Sex)

    你才是个虾皮!我得欺负你。你不愧为人生。

     You little rascal!

    懦夫/你这个胆小鬼。


     I have to give you a hard time.

    我得给你点颜色瞧瞧。

    You don't deserve to be a human being.

    你简直不配称人。

    I‘m interested in why & how you translated in that way, if you want know more , pls e-mail me. :)

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    July 15, 2017
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    一家公司的简介,请帮我改正以下!感谢你们!(只有四个句子)

    The Mobility House

    The leading European player in the electric mobility services market.
    欧洲电动服务行业的领导。

    Location: Entrepreneurial team with a long-term experience in energy management, headquartered in Munich.
    所在地点:能源管理经验广大的事业家队在能源管理方面有着丰富经验的企业家团队,总部在慕尼黑。

    Products and services: Electric charging services, battery and energy management
    产品和服务:充电服务,电池和能源管理。

    Customer base: Leading car manufacturers, utilities and large fleet owners.
    客户群:领先的汽车制造商,公用事业和汽车队的业主。
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    July 14, 2017
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