A writing practice~ Please help me change the simple words to essay words. Thank you!! Furthermore, establishing the ability to plan and organize improves young children's guiding skill. The leader of a group should have a great ability to plan and organize. If young children can establish the organizing ability as early as possible, they could feel frequently when they are in a group project. I still can remember when I was doing group projects in high school, we chose the group leader based on whether the person can make clearly plan or not. Or if we need to choose a new club president, the person who have the best ability to plan and organize is always the winner. The ability to plan and organize not only improves people's leading skills, but also provides people a chance that improve their social skills and communication skills. -------------------------------------------------------- I always use great, need, ... or some simple words when I was writing an essay... But I sometimes don't know how to change it to a better way.

Please help me check my conclusion paragraph~Thank you! In conclusion, it is more advisable for people to maintain the friendships with small number of people over long period of time since it encourages people understand each other better, which could share everything to friends. What's more, it helps people make life time real friends to whom can show their real face. The ability to maintain the friendships over long period of time more important for the happiness. ----------------- I am really confused about how to write the last paragraph of an essay, please help me check the grammar and help me change some words(some words might be too simple to be in an essay.). Thank you so much!!