Making an insurance claim.

Your valuable feedback would be highly appreciated. (Please ignore the lines between the asterisks)
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On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
a) describe the item you lost.
b) explain how you lost it.
c) tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to make an insurance claim for a smartwatch that (this isn't wrong, but many advanced English courses will tell you to eliminate the word 'that' whenever possible. If it isn't necessary, it's best to omit it) I lost last week while on holiday.

The watch that I lost was a birthday present from my wife, and it was a limited edition of the Apple Watch II. What makes made this present truly special is was the fact that both the straps and the watch face edges are were made of gold and my name had been engraved at on the back of the watch by the Apple. Therefore, the watch is was worth a considerable amount of money.

I believe that I must have left the watch on the beach in front of the hotel where I was staying. I did return to search for it, but I can only assume that it was either covered buried in the sand or it had been washed out to the sea.

I took out a comprehensive travel insurance policy with your company and my contract states that all lost items are covered. I would therefore like to ask that you review the attached information regarding the estimated value of the watch and that you process my claim as quickly as possible.

Please let me know if you need any further information.

Faithfully yours,
Adib Yz

Cover letter exercice

(This is just an exercice not for real, Thank you ;) )
Dear  Madam, Dear Sir,,
I am contacting you today to apply for the wine saleperson manager position.
I am currently working in Château Mont-Blanc as the overseas salesperson. My main responsibility is to research new partnerships in Japan, China, and USA. That This position lead me to entails responding to emails and keep maintaining partnerships. Everyday, I tell the employees the numbers of packages to prepare. Furthermore I am in charge of the strategy promotion during fair-goer events. 
Thanks to my past experiences, I am able to respond quickly concerning adjustment in case of majors problems. Being a cheerful but rigorous person lead led me into a collaboration position in contact with each side of the company.
I am available for a further interview everyday after 6p.m. I appreciate you take time to read my cover letter and thank you. I am waiting for your answer.

[I extended to come back to my home. 105 ]

Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would
you go about writing it?
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand them.

I’d been I was in Hokkaido last September traveling for six days. My itinerary would have included four days tripping of traveling, however I couldn’t go back to my home due to the biggest a large typhoon. I was careless and unexpected it. Usually, in Japan, most of the typhoons come to happen in July, August and September.

I predicted to that the typhoon wouldn’t come to Hokkaido area that those days, however it came that but it did.
I’d say that when you plan to visit Japan these seasons during this season, you should have buy some insurances for the airplane flight insurance. If you have one, you can take the instead of the airplane ticket, the staying place and some allowance. (I'm not really sure how to correct this sentence)

Recently, we couldn’t haven't expected the any kinds of disasters (typhoons, floods, forest fires, etc) all of the world. We may prepare to move when it come to our places area in the future.

These are just some minor errors. Your overall meaning was pretty clear.

Can you check & correct my English.

Can you check & collect my English.

●There is an influx of Japanese products  in the

Xstore  OR  The amount of Japanese products in the Xstore has increased

●I would love to talk to you

●I would love to work with you in order to help the project succeed

●This fossil has existed for over a hundred years

●I can understand to a certain degree

●I was absolutey cheated

●This is an absolute thing

（I often hear "absolute＂&＂absolutely＂

in the television.

In what situation do you use this word?）

In the example above, "I was absolutely cheated," absolutely is used as an adverb. Absolute is an adjective. You can also use absolutely by itself when answering questions. For example: 

Q: Would you like to go the movies?

A: Absolutely

OR

A: I would absolutely like to go. 

Homework Part3

This is a very short text for a piece of homework from my college. I would really appreciate it if you could correct it. Thank you.

""..Based on this, this project aims to create an inventory model under a VMI approach, which should be able to generate strategies for those involved in the VMI agreement. In addition, the model is aimed at those products with uncertain demand, mainly classified as impulse buying."