Homework Part3
This is a very short text for a piece of homework from my college. I would really appreciate it if you could correct it. Thank you.
""..Based on this, this project aims to create an inventory model under a VMI approach, which should be able to generate strategies for those involved in the VMI agreement. In addition, the model aimed at those products with uncertain demand, mainly classified as impulsive buying."
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Homework Part3
This is a very short text for a piece of homework from my college. I would really appreciate it if you could correct it. Thank you.""..Based on this, this project aims to create an inventory model under a VMI approach, which should be able to generate strategies for those involved in the VMI agreement. In addition, the model is aimed at those products with uncertain demand, mainly classified as impulse buying."
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Homework Part3
This is a very short text for a piece of homework from my college. I would really appreciate it if you could correct it. Thank you.""..Based on this, this project aims to create an inventory model under a VMI approach, which should be able to generate strategies for those involved in the VMI agreement. In addition(see note), the model aims at those products with uncertain demand, mainly classified as impulsive impulse buying."
Note: 'In addition' isn't wrong, but to me it isn't needed. I would start the sentence with "The model aims"
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