the reteling of the story about two workmen (could you correct that please?)
This story is about workmen and food. Two workers worked at the factory and there was nowhere FOR THEM to eat. Always one man brought with him some sandwiches. But always when he bit a piece of sandwich with fish he was very angry and he threw away the remains of his sandwich. One day his friend asked him, “Bill why do you bring sandwiches with fish? Do you like them?”
Bill answered, “No, I hate them.” His friend asked him, “Why don’t you tell your wife to stop making the sandwiches with fish, because you hate them?” Bill answered, “It won’t be easy, because I haven’t got a wife. I make this sandwiches on my own.”
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the reteling of The story about two workmen (could you correct thisthat please?)
This story is about workmen and food. Two workers worked at a the factory and there was nowhere for them to eat. Always One man always brought with him some sandwiches with him. But always when Every time he took a bite bit a piece of sandwich with fish he was very angry and he threw away the remains of his sandwich. One day his friend asked him, “Bill why do you bring sandwiches with fish? Do you like them?”Bill answered, “No, I hate them.” His friend asked him, “Why don’t you tell your wife to stop making the sandwiches with fish, because you hate them?” Bill answered, “It won’t be easy, because I haven’t got a wife. I make this sandwiches myself on my own.”
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The retelling of the a story about two workmen (could you correct that this please?)
This story is about workmen and food. Two workers worked at the factory and there was nowhere for them to eat. Always One man always brought with him some sandwiches with him. But always whenever he bit a piece of sandwich with fish he was would get very angry and he throw away the remains of his sandwich. One day his friend asked him, “Bill why do you bring sandwiches with fish? Do you like them?”Bill answered, “No, I hate them.” His friend asked him, “Why don’t you tell your wife to stop making the sandwiches with fish, because if you hate them?” Bill answered, “It won’t be easy, because I haven’t got a wife. I make this these sandwiches on my own.”
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The retelling of the a story about two workmen (could you correct that this please?)
This story is about workmen and food. Two workers worked at the factory and there was nowhere for them to eat. Always One man always brought with him some sandwiches with him. But always whenever he bit a piece of sandwich with fish he was would get very angry and he throw away the remains of his sandwich. One day his friend asked him, “Bill why do you bring sandwiches with fish? Do you like them?”Bill answered, “No, I hate them.” His friend asked him, “Why don’t you tell your wife to stop making the sandwiches with fish, because since you hate them?” Bill answered, “It won’t be easy, because I haven’t got a wife. I make this sandwiches on my own.”
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There is just some change needed in grammer. I'm a native English speaker, and I still had to think pretty hard about this one.
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I have made the mistake there so I capitalized for me to remember.
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Why is "for them" capitalized?
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