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- memorable experience when I was aloneA few years ago, my mom's birthday was <s>coming </s> around the corner, and I was thinking about a gift <s>to</s> for her. One day I was alone at home, and suddenly, I thought about making a dress. I had just learned <s>sewing</s> how to sew and I had been wondering about it. That day I bought a beautiful green silk fabric with all my savings <s>money</s>. I sewed all day long and worked hard. Finally, I was able to make a wonderful green dress for my mom. When I gave it to her, she was really excited, and I saw happiness in her eyes. That was the best experience that I had when I was alone.Well done! :)0 votedOctober 15, 20190
The life experience
A few weeks ago I thought about our life goals, dreams and what do we want in our life in reality! You know, many young people after school don't realize know (the word 'realize' in this context is not completely accurate.) what they want in fact. One part of theirs themselves hears their parents and tries to enroll in University. They don't understand why have they chosen that profession (I may say - 'path' instead of profession in this case. Because enrolling in University leads to finding a profession, but it is not a profession yet). Often they make up (When you say "make up", do you mean 'develop'?) their career in other jobs. Another part fraction of youngers young adults start to work in any other places after school, where they only can have earn money. And they spend their valued time to have doing faceless work!
Why do people realize what they want to do in fact so late?Hope this helps you! :)
0 votedAugust 27, 20183Journal 37
hmm, I don't like my room. Something is wrong.I have no idea what to do!
Should I buy some nice, authentic, elegant, ridiculously expensive designer's furnitures!?
In addition to the comma usage here, you do not need to add an 's' at the end of designer and furniture! Otherwise, great job!!
Hope this helps :)
0 votedAugust 25, 20180Corrections
About my face
My face is fair skin for Japanese and weak to sunlight. (Instead, I would say: As a Japanese woman, I have fair skin and am sensitive to heavy sunlight.)There is 16moles on my face...unbelievable. (There are 16 moles on my face, which I find unbelievable.)
I was called "Fist of the North Star", when I was a elementary school student. Because my eyebrows were thick. (I was called "Fist of the North Star," when I was in elementary school. This was because my eyebrows were so thick.)
As a reaction to my nickname, my eyebrows are thin now. It's slightly regret. They are too thin... (In an effort to change my nickname, my eyebrows are thin now. I slightly regret this, because I find them to be too thin.)
And I don't know why but it seems like my face is popular to the uncle generation than the same generation. (I don't know what the reason could be, but it seems that I resemble more of my uncle's genetic features than my mother or father's.)
Hope this helps you! :)
0 votedAugust 25, 20183disapprove request
You'll find my corrections below:
Dear Madam/Sir
At the moment, I am living in Los Angeles temporarily and I’m a resident of this city. (It is a bit weird to say that you're a resident of a city, when you're only living there temporarily.) As soon as I find good job, I would like to move to another city. It would be within my interest to work with you as a Persian teacher, but, unfortunately, it is not cost-effective for me since it is only once a week. If there is the possibility that you have branches in (Los Angeles... but you're going to move, right?) nearby towns, I could cooperate would be interested in pursuing these.
ThanksHope this is helpful for you :)
0 votedAugust 25, 20180World History
I attended a seminar about world history. Today's theme was about Vietnam, Laos and Cambodia. Those three countries are located in the Indochina Peninsula.
Those countries were colonized by western counties and it caused the Vietnam war as well as Cambodia's civil war.
Every time I attend this seminar, most conflicts still last in the world. For example: Conflicts in countries such as Israel, Syria and Somalia have been caused by western countries.I'm sure learning how to include "articles" before words in sentences can be quite difficult. But, I was able to understand what you wrote which is the most important thing! Good work :)
0 votedJuly 22, 20181My recent journey, could somebody check ?
I went to Amsterdam 1 month ago.
I went there by myself.
I was going to Amsterdam to see the most popular places. I DIDN’T HAVE ANY SPECIFIC PLACE I WANTED TO SEE.
My journey was fun and I enjoyed it.
I was sightseeing and I saw a very very popular street called The Red District.
I met lots of people from the USA and I stayed in a hostel with people from Great Britain. It was the first time I spoke to people from this country so it was very interesting but at first I could not understand them very well.You did very well in writing this! If youd like further help, perhaps you can book a lesson and we work together :)
0 votedJuly 20, 20181My Last Weekend!
Good evening to everybody!
Honestly, I want to turn my notebook into a little blog about my life.
I think this can help me to keep up my promise to write here everyday.
My friends and I met up last Sunday to go to the seashore and have a barbecue.
We had stopped near a flower field before we arrived at the seashore.
There were different flowers on this field. We shot a lot of pictures for instagram (this is not advertised).There was a pathway near this flower field. That pathway led us to the edge of the half-island. There was an opening facing an amazing view on the sea and an island located in the middle
When we drove to the seashore, we saw that another people had arrived there very early in the morning.Luckily, my friend saw that one person (or one group of people) was/were going home and we were waiting to take their place.
We took a nice place with a good view on the sea and without any wind.
I will remember this day as it was very special to me!
Have a nice day!Hope this helped you! If you need any more help, feel free to send me a message :)
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