Critical report for final homework, please help me to have a check
When our small group did prototype for infinite, another small group were doing the test for constellation.
Yun looked at a video (Second Story, 2013) about constellation and led her to do a project about constellation.
Using coordinates to represent stars in the constellations. We changed the floor into
a big coordinates (a big coordinate / some big coordinates), different points on the floor represent
ed a different star in the sky. When
the audience
stand stood on the points for one constellation,
that constellation
in on the screen would
bright light up to show the stars of the constellation to the audience. In this way, visitors could learn the shape and location of constellations.
After we finished our prototypes
seperately separately, we discussed
it together and compared both plans.The infinite project didn’t have enough meaning, we couldn’t teach audience
any thing anything through letting them guess numbers together.
When it comes to the constellation, it was a new way to exploit the virtual universe. Different from
troditional traditional methods
, to observe the galaxy through the light that reflects back from stars several light years ago (Yan et al., 2006).
And (Never start a sentence with "And")then make the galaxy visible
, by giving them different colors
we decided that we have picked (Andrew, 2015). We could represent the stars in the constellations
immediatly immediately, when
the audience want
ed to see them
, (
I would end the sentence here and start a new sentence) making the universe turn turn the universe into a digital universe.
And (Same error as mentioned before) we could introduce constellations to the audience
, and show how many stars each constellation
have has. Therefore, we decided to do
futher further development for constellation.