Journal 37
hmm, I don't like my room. Something is wrong.
I have no idea what to do!
Should I buy some nice authentic elegant ridiculously expensive designer's furnitures!?
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Journal 37
hmm, I don't like my room. Something is wrong.I have no idea what to do!
Should I buy some nice, authentic, elegant, ridiculously expensive designer's furnitures!?
In addition to the comma usage here, you do not need to add an 's' at the end of designer and furniture! Otherwise, great job!!
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Journal 37
hmm, I don't like my room. Something is wrong.I have no idea what to do!
Should I buy some nice, authentic, elegant, ridiculously expensive designer's furnitures!?
You should add commas. Aside from that, there’s not any more problems, so good job!
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It's not a good idea to buy funitures simply becuase they are expensive. Buy things that you really like
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