Reading for retelling Are there mistakes? ( ﾟдﾟ) The story is about a men called Greg who was received as a present a shinny new camera. He was exited so he decided to practice his photography skills in the park and the camera worked like a dream. After that he returned home and realised that he didn't have the camera so as quick as a flash he went to the park to look for it but it wasn't there. A few weeks while he read the newspaper, his photos have come out so he turned as white as a sheet. And then Greg discovered that someone have been taken his camera and have handed it in to the newpaper office where Greg got back his camera with the phone number of the person who found it. So he called her and when they met , they ended up get like house of fire. Finally Greg noticed that she was a famous photographer and she wanted to help him with his career.

The Debate About the Idea of Changing the Legal Age ( ESSAY) (any mistakes? ) o.O The big debate as to whether the legal age should be raised to 21 is an ongoing issue. There are both arguments for and against this matter. First of all have the enough age to do something, it depends on different facts because we should be aware of the risks that take Young people as for example a teenager of 16 or 17 years old musn´t a driving license, Why? because they´re very young. I certainly believe that It´s necessary considerer the level of education because in some countries, the education decreases more and more preventing us from being able to do certain activities. On other hands, it has long been my feeling that there are more facilities since technology´s process and that become us more lazy. Without doubt, many of us are witnesses that the last generation was more independent tan the actual generation because before people used to effort to achieve what they wanted but nowadays, everything are within reach only a `CLICK`. People are convinced that it´s betther raise the age because It´s the only solution more eficient at the moment to prevent accidents as using our mobile phone while we´re driving that provocate accidents. Although, this can be more of a question of experience and obedience to being a driving young as opposed to a question of age, if adolescents are more likely to be able to access more advanced technology more often, it stands to reason that raising the legal age would simply delay any potential problems rather than solving them. In conclusion, the experience that the teenagers need ,it depends country´s situation ,customs and education. Nevertheless the technology is a important fact because we should know how to give it a good use and to keep a control so a good teaching young people can prevent some problems in the future

Are there any mistake?? o_O Does school prepare students for the world of work? Many people said 'no'. To begin with this, the school system and the parents should be working together to raice educated students to be knowledgeable about the word around them. As far as I'm concerned, school teaches you that if you work hard enough you will get a good job and earn a lot of money to be successful but the idea of success is what a person makes wants it to be . Futthermore, schools need to do more to prepare students for the world of work by teaching interview lessons and skills as good communication and teamwork. On the other hands, somr people believe that we learn the basic things during a job making mistakes because the school didn't prepare for life in today's world very well. We know in our life, the most important things we learn it on our own. To sum up. The traditional education system doesn't serve the needs of the actual generation. We must do more for a good preparing to world of work.

what do you think about this? // Are there any mistakes? Please. check this :v STUDY PLAN: To create a study plan is necessary follow this important steps. The first step talk about take notes about your daily activities for onee-week period until your rest time or work schedules, school, etc to dedicated an a hour of studying. The second steps define the study plan so when you make your schedule , you have to be sure of the time that you are going to devote to each subject. The third step is to ask yourself the goal you want to achieve. Besides you will have to get accustomed your study plan although there will be times when you dont have any evaluation so It will tempting to skip your study sesion as free time, you shouldnt let this happen and take advantage of that time to advance subjects. Finally, the fourth and last step speaks only of having a good follow-up your study plan and fine-tune all terms.

who can help me with the correction ,please?? :o A: Hi ! How are you?what have you been doing? B: Hi, recently I've been feeling tired because I've been working A: Oh! And where are you staying? B: I'm staying in London. It's a stunning place A: I've never live in a Big city but one day I would like to B: Oh! I've love this city since the Day I arrived here A: And what are your future plans? B: I going to eat out tonight in a restaurant of spicy food A: Great! And what do you work? B: I'm a jounalist. I work with my father. The newpaper was written by us A: Oh! Do you live with your dad? B: No, I live alone A: Dont you ever get lonely? B: Sometimes but no very often. I really dont have time to get lonely. I work every day exept sunday A: You should relax and get away for a few weeks. B: Yes, you're right. If I had time, I would like travel to the beath A: I used to go to the beath with my family when I was young B: Really, maybe I will travel to France with my brother next year A: Ok, I should to go but then I will call you. Bye B: No problem, bye!

help me please with the correction D: The text is about a some advices and ways to prepearing to university. For example ,you must to be able to have a good control pf your own life, and to work alone and to organice your time well. This is abilities that you must have. Also the text explain typical worries when you start university as worry about some aspect of yor study and meet new people so you should find time to feel confortable

practice to exam The difference between university and school is that studing at university hace more responsability and more freedom to study than school because at school your parents are there to help you in all questions that you have