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The story is about a men called Greg who was received as a present a shinny new camera. He was exited so he decided to practice his photography skills in the park and the camera worked like a dream. After that he returned home and realised that he didn't have the camera so as quick as a flash he went to the park to look for it but it wasn't there.
A few weeks while he read the newspaper, his photos have come out so he turned as white as a sheet. And then Greg discovered that someone have been taken his camera and have handed it in to the newpaper office where Greg got back his camera with the phone number of the person who found it. So he called her and when they met , they ended up get like house of fire. Finally Greg noticed that she was a famous photographer and she wanted to help him with his career.
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Reading for retelling
Are there mistakes? ( ﾟдﾟ)This story is about a man called Greg who received a shiny new camera as a present . He was exited so he decided to practice his photography skills in the park and the camera worked like a dream. After that he returned home and realised that he didn't have the camera so as quick as a flash, he went to the park to look for it but it wasn't there.
A few weeks later he was reading the newspaper, his photos had come out so he turned as white as a sheet. And then Greg discovered that someone had taken his camera and handed it in to the newspaper office, where Greg got his camera back with the phone number of the person who found it. So he called her and when they met , (they ended up get like house of fire?). Finally Greg noticed that she was a famous photographer and she wanted to help him with his career.
I could understand this quite well while reading it, but maybe practice tenses a bit more? (Had, have, has). Apart from that, the only part that I didn't understand was 'They ended up get like houses of fire'. I could follow the story very well though! :3
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Reading for retelling
Are there mistakes? ( ﾟдﾟ)The story is about a man called Greg who was received as a present a shinny new camera. He was excited so he decided to practice his photography skills in the park, and the camera worked like a dream. After that, he returned home and realized that he didn't have the camera. So, as quick as a flash, he went to the park to look for it, but it wasn't there.
A few weeks later, while he read the newspaper, his photos have came out. so He turned as white as a sheet. And then Greg discovered that someone had been taking pictures with his camera and had handed it in to the newspaper office where Greg got back his camera with the phone number of the person who found it. So he called her. and When they met , they ended up getting along like a house on fire. Finally, Greg learned that she was a famous photographer and that she wanted to help him with his career.
Well done!
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Reading for retelling
Are there mistakes? ( ﾟдﾟ)The story is about a men man called Greg who was received as a present a shinny new camera. He was exited, so he decided to practice his photography skills in the park and the camera worked like a dream. After that he returned home and realised that he didn't have the camera, so as quick as a flash he went to the park to look for it, but it wasn't there.
A few weeks (later ???) while he read the newspaper, he saw his photos and (his photos have come out) so he turned as white as a sheet. And then Greg discovered that someone have been taken took his camera and have handed it in to the newpaper office where Greg got back his camera with the phone number of the person who found it. So he called her and when they met , they ended up (get like house of fire). Finally Greg noticed that she was a famous photographer and she wanted to help him with his career.
*I'm unclear/not understanding the phrases in red. Nice story.
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