Opinion essay , is it correct ? :O
Are controlling the weather would be a good thing or a bad thing? There could be a lot of answers with personal opinions about this topic so we need to be open-minded to know what will be the correct way. As far as I'm concerned these are already experts working on the manipulation of weather so personally I think that it could be related with the recently climate changes. Furthermore Science is the only who know how are the world and what would be the risks that they will have to take. However ,the science is also wrong, either worsening the situation or creating a new problem but humans always makes mistakes but the point is be careful because there are things that we don't prepare to control or we haven't the enough technology.
All of all, I believe that if we be careful especially with the environment ,we will achieve great things and prevent future problems ,in this case ,If climate change turns ugly, then many countries will start looking at desperate measures because on the one hand ,we don't know how much time we have left.
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Is Are controlling the weather would be a good thing or a bad thing? There could be a lot of answers with personal opinions about this topic, so therefore we need to be open-minded to know what will be the correct best way forward way. As far as I'm concerned these there are already experts working on the manipulation of weather. so Personally I think that it could be related to with the recently climate changes. Furthermore Science is scientists are the only ones (NOTE : ones is plural 1) who know how are the world weather works and what would be the risks would be that they will have to take. However ,the science is can also be wrong, either worsening the situation or creating a new problem. but Humans always makes mistakes but the point is to be careful because there are things that we don't prepare know how to control or we haven't got sufficient the enough technology.
All of all, All in all, I believe that if we be are careful, especially with the environment ,we will achieve great things and prevent future problems. In this case, if climate change turns ugly, then many countries will start looking at desperate measures because on the one hand, we don't know how much time we have left.
Can you try again for the last part
Puede intentar de nuevo el fin de partido.
Can you try again for the last part
Puede intentar de nuevo el fin de partido.
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Tu inglés es no mal. Mientras no perfecto, yo entiendo tu frases y texto. Yo se correcto ese por tu.
Por mas cambia el tiempo, las países será mal, por que esta es necesita por todo las países a haber comida por los personas.
Your English is pretty good. While not perfect, I understand your phrases and text. I will correct this for you.
For very changeable weather, the countries will behave badly, because it is necessary for all countries to have food for the people.
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