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Hi,I am a Native Chinese speaker. I am a holder of a BSc in Sociology and now I am doing my Master’s degree in Political Science. that is,(The Communist Party's history and establishment ) Interesting,Huh! My studying helps me have a better insight about the current situation in China. I teach more than Chinese language itself,which distinguish me from other language partners. I can Speak standard mandarin without regional accent. I have the Certificate of Putonghua Proficiency Test Grade(93.5/100；A+),which it's a must-get qualification when you want to become a TV broadcaster in China. I want a language exchange. Chinese-French Chinese-German（I want more friends who speak German fluently） ▓▓(Open it with your nail and win a lottery…!) Want 1~2 scheduled sessions exchange per week if we are language partner besides informal talks Persistent,Serious learner and eager to learn. I like reading philosophy, theology,Chinese history, political and literature books. I am a professional academic researcher and I am confident that I can help your Chinese. I use skype,wechat&qq

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请你修改我的句子 - 第二
对不起，我<strike>后悔</strike>对这个错误很后悔。
律师限制总统的权利。
我哥哥经常断言不对的事情。
我有一个朋友，她生气的时候，<strike>他</strike><strike>开始</strike>会得罪不认识的人。
这件事不太重要，请你平静下来。
我们得消除我们的害怕。
她坚持她的意思，没有人<strike>不</strike>可以让她改变。
几个部门形成一个公司。
今天太阳光太强了，几乎使我失明。
在我的工作中，我每两个月<strike>我</strike>参加一个训练。
这个墙壁非常<strike>大</strike>厚，是不可穿透的。
我的老板给我<strike>装备</strike>配一<strike>个</strike>台/部电脑。
我的老板雇佣我。
我明白你的错误，我原谅你！
我被我女朋友迷住了。

谢谢你！
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June 5, 2017
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我的夏天的旅行
去年夏天我在<strike>去</strike>中国<strike>在</strike>阳朔教<strike>着</strike>英文。
我两年以前已经去<strike>了</strike>过那里，所以我已经看过很多我想看见的东西，不过虽然什么没有<strike>新的看见的东西</strike>新鲜事，我<strike>待在那里的时间不是</strike>也没有浪费时间<strike>的</strike>，因为我这一次认识很多乡亲。为了<strike>我</strike>想提高<strike>一点</strike>我的中文，我跟她们只<strike>有</strike>说中文，并且<strike>因为</strike>他们不<strike>能</strike>会说英文。虽然<strike>就是</strike>我们刚认识了不久，他们也让我感觉我是他们的家人。他们<strike>都多好人</strike>人很好，<strike>和</strike>我离开<strike>以来</strike>后，我们还互相发<strike>给</strike>短信。我在中国那<strike>一次</strike>段时光，一边发现中国的文化，一边<strike>发现</strike>认识中国的朋友。
（As a native speaker, I can understand what you are saying, but there are some details to notice.Great,keep writing!）
Last summer I was teaching English in Yangshuo in China. I had already been there the year before, so I had already seen a lot of the things that I wanted to see, however, even though there was nothing new to see, the time I spent there wasn't wasted because I met a lot of locals. We just spoke Chinese seeing as I wanted to improve but also because they didn't speak English. Even though we had just met, they made me feel like a member of the family. They are all wonderful people and since I left, we have been sending each other messages. On that trip I discovered Chinese culture and discovered some Chinese friends at the same time.
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May 26, 2017
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请大家帮我修改一下。
请结合下列词语（要全部使用，顺序不分先后），写一篇 80 字左右的短文。
满足压力忽视健康放松

1）我有一个朋友，他从不满足于已有的成绩<strike>。 </strike> ，所以他一直感<strike>受</strike>到很大的生活压力。每天他都感觉<strike>不</strike>很难放松下来。为工作他忽视身体健康<strike>。 </strike>，有一次遇到困难，<strike>所有都丢了</strike>他病倒了（he fell sick），他才发现金钱不是世界上最重要的东西。
（When a sentence doesn't finish,we need use comma instead of full stop “。” . It 's the detail need to be kept in mind.）
(He could do everything for work and thus ignore his health. So, logically we can come to the conclusion that he fell sick when he faced the difficulties.) 
请结合这张图片写一篇 80 字左右的短文。
2）抽烟对身体有害。为了安全和别人的健康，很多地方禁止抽烟。例如：加油站，飞机，学校，医院等。戒烟不是太难的事，只要你<strike>支</strike>坚持努力就行了。为了你的孩子，<strike>新</strike>周围的人和更好的世界，今天戒烟吧。
（‘’支持”is equal to "support", here it means you need to be persistent.）
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May 19, 2017
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1。爱情！！！2。句子对不对？
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爱情是很深的感情。我觉得如果人不感觉难过 ， 就<strike>人</strike>不会感觉幸福。互相了解是我们爱情的基础。主要的感情是共同的事情。我觉得人真的爱父母，爷爷，外祖母，祖母，奶奶和爱人。

2。
1）即使开始下雨，我也去散步。
2）既<strike>好</strike>质量好又便宜。
3）即使树倒在我身上，我也继续做作业。
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May 19, 2017
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请你修改我的句子
在美国常常<strike>发生</strike>刮龙卷风。
在山里经常有雪崩。
你叫喊的时候，我可以听见一个喊声。
狗吠声很恼人。
病人常常呻吟。
我可以吹哨。
冰株很好看。
冬天早上的时候外面<strike>有严寒</strike>。非常冷（freezing cold）
小心，外面<strike>有</strike>地面结了一层薄冰。
我生病了，我感冒了。
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May 18, 2017
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请大家帮我修改一下。
请结合下列词语，写一篇80字左右的短信：宿舍，理解，开心，坦率，帮助。
1）我和小明是同学。我们都住在学校的宿舍。他是一个很坦率，热心的人。很<strike>有</strike>多次他帮助我做练习，理解问题。我们经常一起去玩儿，聊天得很开心。有他<strike>是</strike>做同伴，我觉得很幸福。

请结合这张图片写一篇80字左右的短文：
2）小张和我是朋友。我们已经是同学，毕业后是同事，<strike>一起</strike>工作在同一所公司。（Here we add "同” referring working the same company, it's common used.）没有事的时候，我们常常见面聊天儿。“今天工作怎么了？”，“家庭还好吗？”等经常是我们的<strike>主</strike>话题。有时候遇到困难，我们相互帮助。很多年了，他是我最好的朋友。
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May 18, 2017
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Are these sentences correct?
我们应该经常坐公共交通，<strike>在家</strike><strike>离开</strike>少开（drive less）我们的车。

坐公共交通有很多受益：
1.下班,下课，它可以帮你放松。你可以听音乐，看书或者玩游戏在你的手机。
2. <strike>更便宜比你每天坐车</strike>。比你每天开车要便宜的多。（much more cheaper than driving; here you compare the pubic transportation with private cars）
3. 你会有一个很健康的习惯。比如；你<strike>有</strike>要（need to ）走或者骑自行车去<strike>车</strike>站。
4. 它减少污染。
还有很多受益之处<strike>坐公共交通。
</strike>
We should take public transportation more often and leave the car at home.

There are a lot of benefits of taking public transportation:
1. After work/school it can help you relax. You can listen to music, read a book or play a game on your telephone.
2. It's much cheaper than taking the car everyday.
3. You will have a active healthy lifestyle. For example: you have to walk or cycle to the station.
4. It reduces pollution.
And there are a lot more benefits of taking public transportation.
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May 18, 2017
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Practice
I have learnt some new grammar rules, so I thought I would practice them here, see what you people think.

1.除了学习中文还工作的全职
2.每天跑步对身体没有好处
3.除了足球我都喜欢云动。
3. 我喜欢一边开车一边听音乐。

What do you think?

1.除了学习中文，我还有一份全职工作<strike>的全职</strike> 。
（We need the subject here, so add a comma. Besides, we put the adj. before the noun in Chinese）
2.perfect sentence

3. 除了足球外 , 我<strike>都</strike>喜欢任何<strike>云</strike>运动。
（Here it is the same usage "except" in English.）
4.Lovely sentence.
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May 17, 2017
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签证的事情
我和我的弟弟住在澳大利亚。我住在<strike>玻璃丝班</strike>(布里斯班Brisbane)<strike>和,</strike>我的弟弟住在墨尔本。由于当地的政府改变 了一些签证<strike>的</strike>规则，我的弟弟不可以<strike>弄</strike>申请别的工作签证，所以他<strike>应该出发</strike>要离开这个美丽的国家。他很伤：他<strike>有工作（当</strike>是一名摄影师<strike>)</strike>, 他有很多朋友<strike>，等等 </strike>。以便提高他的英语力，我建议他去搬<strike>家</strike>去新西兰。那个国家<strike>比</strike>离澳大利亚很近， <strike>不贵和很多样哈哈哈</strike>。（那儿生活成本低，文化多样。）
我觉得我的弟弟<strike>很困</strike>( 这段时间不是很顺利)。但是他很年轻，相信<strike>在</strike>他的生活将<strike>有越来越计划</strike>（变得越来越好）。意大利的成语说：如果一个小门关，一个大门开。
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May 17, 2017
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5月17好第一次日记
大家好！这是我第一次在Italki上写文章。我的中文老师美惠建议我尽可能多地写文章，来<strike>而</strike>练习我的中文写作能力。

我觉得这就是个很好的方法！说话的时候纠正<strike>没</strike>每（every）个错误挺难的，但是写文章呢，却很容易发现其中的问题（if you omitted here, it may cause ambiguous meanings）。<strike>那</strike>所以我决定每天写一篇短<strike>短</strike>（or you can use "小”，which also means short article）的文章，<strike>来</strike>每天进一小步，把我的汉语<strike>一般</strike>水平提高。

<strike>我</strike>首先我会<strike>每天</strike>写关<strike>于我每天生活的</strike>（“日记”diary,which already means you write down what happened each day, so if you add “每天写关于我每天生活的”，it cause repetition of meaning）日记，之后会写比较复杂的话题。我期待着继续写！

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May 17, 2017
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