Hi Yukiko-San,
This was a very strong attempt at a very compelling diary entry. Thank you for sharing. There were areas, however, that were very hard to understand, but I used context and guessed at your meaning. Please let me know if you meant something else.
I hope this helps. It's rough and fast, as I've just gotten home after a long day! :D
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31th Oct
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This is my diary entry about
teaching <s>spending</s> a class in
Malawi.<o:p></o:p>
・Class<o:p></o:p>
・Daily life in Malawi<o:p></o:p>
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I had only one class,
<s>only </s>Form 2 Chemistry.<o:p></o:p>
I wanted to teach more but I <s>couldn't </s> wouldn’t have been able to manage. When I
wrote <s>the </s>information on the
blackboard, the students didn't read it well
<s>clearly</s>. <s>While I was writing </s>As I wrote, they would ask<s>ed</s> me what I was writing <s>wrote</s> on the board<s>s</s>.<o:p></o:p>
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I didn't want to let <s>the</s>
late students <s>who come late. I did
not allow the students to</s> enter the classroom
<s>house</s>. They sometimes made <s>some</s> excuses, but I sent <s>let</s> them <s>go</s> away.
They asked other teachers for permission <s>in order</s> to enter the
classroom. That was true paper. (??) It was written in
school rules that <s>the </s>teachers could
<s>would</s> give <s>the</s> students consequences
<s>the punishment</s>. I thought, however,
the students were using <s>utilize</s> the teachers. <s>in order to get the
permission</s>.<o:p></o:p>
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Anyway, I <s>am </s>wonder<s>ing</s> about all the <s>there
are many</s> Japanese cars moving in Malawi. <s>The</s> Cars are supposed to be cheaper in Malawi<s>an</s> <s>more </s>than
in Japan. I don't think so. <s>The</s> Cars
that were stolen in Japan are on the road in Asian <s>country </s>and other
countries. Car theft sends them to Africa.<s>n countries....</s><o:p></o:p>
Malawians think
Japanese cars are cheaper than <s>what we bought</s> in Malawi.<o:p></o:p>
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Another issue: I want to use WhatsApp, but my phone <s>does
not</s> won’t install the <s>what's up</s>
app.<o:p></o:p>
