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Correction November 4 Please correct my sentences. :When our shift for next week will be assigned? :Our cafe is very neat. We must keep it neat. :The most important thing to get a job in Canada is practical experiences. :Hard working is the main element of success. :The cloth is as good as the other one. :I keep fit by jogging. :The phone bill this month was lower than last month. :I don't want to buy a rotten food. :These tomatoes have already rotted. :I put on thick coat today, it's so cold outside! :Remember to clock out when you leave work. : The muffins had been baked when I got there. :It was announced that she will quit the job next month. :The driver announced that the train would stop at next station to all passengers. :I'm afraid of closing the store because I haven't done that lately. (I mean, we have to specific works when we close the store such as counting income. ) :I've seen the movie maybe more than 3 times. :I'll go to a super market to buy milk after work. :I was having lunch when you called me so I missed your calling. :I'll do well on work because I've been trained for a month. :I'm getting fat since last year... :I got 2 kg for a few month. (I actually don't get "for a few month". It means,"ここ数ヶ月の間"?)

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Correction November 4

Please correct my sentences.


:When will our shift for next week will be assigned?

:Our cafe is very neat. We must keep it neat.

:The most important thing to get a job in Canada is practical experiences.

:Hard working is the main element of success.

:The This cloth is as good as the other one.

:I keep fit by jogging.

:The phone bill this month was lower than last month.

:I don't want to buy a rotten food.
:These tomatoes have already rotted.

:I put on a thick coat today, it's so cold outside!

:Remember to clock out when you leave work.

: The muffins had been baked when I got there.

:It was announced that she will quit the job next month.

:The driver announced to all passengers that the train would stop at the next station to all passengers.

:I'm afraid of closing the store because I haven't done that lately.
(I mean, we have to specific works when we close the store such as counting income. )

:I've seen the movie maybe more than 3 times.

:I'll go to a super market to buy milk after work.

:I was having lunch when you called me so I missed your calling.

:I'll do well on at work because I've been trained for a month.

:I'm getting fat since last year... (I'd be more likely to say: I've put on weight since last year...  or you could say: I've got fat since last year)

:I got 2 kg for a few month.
(I actually don't get "for a few month". It means,"ここ数ヶ月の間"?)

 I don't understand the Japanese but are you still talking about getting fat? I would write I've put on 2kg in the last few months.



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Hi! Julie corrected your sentences wonderfully!

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