Correction November 4
Please correct my sentences.
:When our shift for next week will be assigned?
:Our cafe is very neat. We must keep it neat.
:The most important thing to get a job in Canada is practical experiences.
:Hard working is the main element of success.
:The cloth is as good as the other one.
:I keep fit by jogging.
:The phone bill this month was lower than last month.
:I don't want to buy a rotten food.
:These tomatoes have already rotted.
:I put on thick coat today, it's so cold outside!
:Remember to clock out when you leave work.
: The muffins had been baked when I got there.
:It was announced that she will quit the job next month.
:The driver announced that the train would stop at next station to all passengers.
:I'm afraid of closing the store because I haven't done that lately.
(I mean, we have to specific works when we close the store such as counting income. )
:I've seen the movie maybe more than 3 times.
:I'll go to a super market to buy milk after work.
:I was having lunch when you called me so I missed your calling.
:I'll do well on work because I've been trained for a month.
:I'm getting fat since last year...
:I got 2 kg for a few month.
(I actually don't get "for a few month". It means,"ここ数ヶ月の間"?)
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Correction November 4
Please correct my sentences.:When will our shift for next week will be assigned?
:Our cafe is very neat. We must keep it neat.
:The most important thing to get a job in Canada is practical experiences.
:Hard working is the main element of success.
:The This cloth is as good as the other one.
:I keep fit by jogging.
:The phone bill this month was lower than last month.
:I don't want to buy a rotten food.
:These tomatoes have already rotted.
:I put on a thick coat today, it's so cold outside!
:Remember to clock out when you leave work.
: The muffins had been baked when I got there.
:It was announced that she will quit the job next month.
:The driver announced to all passengers that the train would stop at the next station to all passengers.
:I'm afraid of closing the store because I haven't done that lately.
(I mean, we have to specific works when we close the store such as counting income. )
:I've seen the movie maybe more than 3 times.
:I'll go to a super market to buy milk after work.
:I was having lunch when you called me so I missed your calling.
:I'll do well on at work because I've been trained for a month.
:I'm getting fat since last year... (I'd be more likely to say: I've put on weight since last year... or you could say: I've got fat since last year)
:I got 2 kg for a few month.
(I actually don't get "for a few month". It means,"ここ数ヶ月の間"?)
I don't understand the Japanese but are you still talking about getting fat? I would write I've put on 2kg in the last few months.
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Hi! Julie corrected your sentences wonderfully!
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