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Hi Yukiko-San,
This was a very strong attempt at a very compelling diary entry. Thank you for sharing. There were areas, however, that were very hard to understand, but I used context and guessed at your meaning. Please let me know if you meant something else.
I hope this helps. It's rough and fast, as I've just gotten home after a long day! :D
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31th Oct
This is my diary entry about
teaching spending a class in
Malawi.
・Class
・Daily life in Malawi
I had only one class,
only Form 2 Chemistry.
I wanted to teach more but I couldn't wouldn’t have been able to manage. When I
wrote the information on the
blackboard, the students didn't read it well
clearly. While I was writing As I wrote, they would asked me what I was writing wrote on the boards.
I didn't want to let the
late students who come late. I did
not allow the students to enter the classroom
house. They sometimes made some excuses, but I sent let them go away.
They asked other teachers for permission in order to enter the
classroom. That was true paper. (??) It was written in
school rules that the teachers could
would give the students consequences
the punishment. I thought, however,
the students were using utilize the teachers. in order to get the
permission.
Anyway, I am wondering about all the there
are many Japanese cars moving in Malawi. The Cars are supposed to be cheaper in Malawian more than
in Japan. I don't think so. The Cars
that were stolen in Japan are on the road in Asian country and other
countries. Car theft sends them to Africa.n countries....
Malawians think
Japanese cars are cheaper than what we bought in Malawi.
Another issue: I want to use WhatsApp, but my phone does
not won’t install the what's up
app.
This is my diary about spending a class in Malawi.
31th OctThis is my diary about spending a class in Malawi.
・Class
・Daily life in Malawi
I had one class, only Form 2 Chemistry.
I wanted to teach more but I couldn't manage. When I wrote the information on the black board, the students couldn't read it clearly. While I was writing they asked me what I wrote.
I do not want students who come late. I did not allow them to enter the room. They sometimes made some excuses. I let them go away. They asked other teachers for permission to enter the classroom. (That was true paper.?) (It was written the teacher would give the students the punishment. I thought the students use the teachers in order to get the permission.?)
Anyway I am wondering whether there are many Japanese cars in Malawi. The cars are supposed to be cheaper in Malawi than in Japan. I don't think so. The cars that were stolen in Japan are on the road in Asian countries and elsewhere. Car theft sends them to African countries....
Malawians think Japanese cars are cheaper than what we bought in Malawi.
Another issue. I want to use "what's up". But my phone does not install the what's up app**. Do I have to buy another phone that is compatible?*
*if that was your question?
*or, the wassuppssapp.
Very well written!
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