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A Fex
Dear Mr Randy Burr:
Thank you for your order by fax,. Further to to consider your request for renting a warehouse over the next eighteen months. I’d like to mention that the warehouse space of the W1 site could offer you a 10% discount for a two-year booking. They could also offer you two spaces at 50 square meters and 24-hour access. However, please note that their accessing is relatively poor and parking just only for five vehicles at most.
As an interesting alternative, you might wish to consider an option new premise called Circular storage. Although, this area is out of the city centre, but it’s only a 30-minite drive from Brown and Burr.
It also has the following features:
--All spaces available from 25m to 100m.
--Two thirds the price of W1.
--Just off the expressway motorway. Easy access for lorries and adequate parking. Suitable parking facilities for over twenty staff.
--Brand new facility. CCTV and security firm check once a night.
Please consider this possibility. A visit to the premises can be arranged. Although I would suggest a prompt decision on this second option.
I look forward to hearing from you in the very near future.
Yours sincerely This is a very nice letter Jane. It is well organized and very descriptive. You are a good sales person. :-) I'll take the Circular storage. :-D Scott0 votedJanuary 25, 20180memo08
Memo:
We will have a cleaning event at 3 pm next afternoon tomorrow.. The venue is in (or....It will be held in the) multimedia-room on the fourth floor. Every staff member must be attended. Please let me know if you get this information. Thank you.Hi Jane, Is a "cleaning event" a meeting, or is it a gathering of the staff to clean the multi-media room?
0 votedNovember 21, 20170Horror Story
It was three o’clock in the morning when the telephone rang. I answered the phone but nobody spoke. After that, I returned to my bed and I tried to sleep again. Ten minutes later, I heard my dog barking in the garage and I looked out my window. I saw five cats in the street.
They must be a cat gang; I could recognize the leader of the gang because two months ago I saw a poster where he had disappeared; his name was Devil. All of the cats looked as if they were possessed by a demon. My dogs didn’t stop barking and I couldn’t get out because I couldn't find my keys. The phone rang again and this time I heard a kid laughing kid on the phone.
I was terrified and I felt like I was in a dream and I was really in one. I wish my dream didn’t come true. If only I never experienced bad dreams. The next morning, I found my keys in the street. (Then, I have a dude if I’m sleepwalker, I will walk at night.) << I don't understand the meaning of that sentence. The word "dude" doesn't sound correct.I won’t eat big dinners at the night in order to avoid paranormal experiences in dreams.
Very nice story! Good luck with your English studies Maga. :-)
0 votedNovember 16, 201701) What did you do when the accident occurred?
I called Michael.
2) Next weekend we will go to an art exhibition.
3) I went to England six months ago. I started my English course three months ago.
4) Be quiet! Joh is sleeping.
5) Listen Jane, I don't care that you missed the bus this morning. You were late to work yesterday morning too.
6) In the last 100 years, traveling has become much easier and very comfortable. In the 19th century, it took two or three months to cross North America; the trip was often dangerous. Things have changed a great deal lately.
7) Mark's English has improved. He usually watches American television programs and studies grammar every day. Soon he will be totally fluent.
8) When I arrived home last night, Jane prepared a special dinner.
9) My mother used to call (or called) my father at work every day when they were young, but today she does not call him.
10) Three days ago, Meg began to read Little Women. She did not finish it. Now she surfs the net for the summary of the novel because she thinks she has a test.
Good luck with your English studies Marco!! :-)
0 votedNovember 16, 20171Report 07－supplier
Introduction:
This report aims to reflect some show the problems we are having with one of our suppliers, Sorenson, and to recommend how to deal with this situation.
Findings:
There are three main troubles problems existing in we are having (or we are experiencing) with Sorenson’s services during this year. Firstly, twenty-four times of later deliveries, much more than last year. Their deliveries have been late 24 times; much more than last year. Secondly, seventeen times of products quality unsatisfactory, which caused our customers complained about this increasingly. We have had quality problems with their shipments 17 times, which has caused increased customer complaints.Thirdly, errors with invoices have caused brought us many problems
Furthermore, Sorenson’s costs are 20% higher than our other suppliers.
Conclusion:
We have to cut out the cooperation ties with Serenson immediately. Also, we must check all our invoices from suppliers in future.Nice essay about supplier problems Jane. I wish I could tell you clear reasons why I wrote the suggestions here. But I hope the sentences I have provided are helpful for your learning. :-) Thanks, Scott
0 votedNovember 13, 20170Email 07-purchase
I’d recommend that we should purchase some new equipment from this exhibition, which includes 2 PowerPoint and 10 microphones. The same kinds of facilities our conference room have been using are complete aging. That has caused a bad impact during the meeting. So making an order for them is needed.Hi Jane, I only noticed one word I would delete. (complete) This is very well written!
I am going to write this in a similar way below, with a few changes - I hope the words that I use are helpful.
Email 07-purchase
I would recommend that we should purchase some new equipment from this exhibition, which includes 2 PowerPoints and 10 microphones. The same equipment that we are now using in our conference room is ready to be replaced. That has caused a bad impact during the meeting. So making an order for them is needed.
Great! Nice work. :-)
0 votedNovember 10, 20170Report 06
Instructions:
The aim of this report is analyzing which one store in our region should be shut off down (or "closed") and how to improve the performance of two others. our other two stores.
Findings:
Comparing three of our stores’ performances during Jan to Mar, we found: the facts are follows:
1. The profits of our Village store was far lower than which in our other two other stores. The main reason is it is located in the remote countryside.
2. The Town-centre store profited 13000 Euros, which was better than our expectation.
3. The Out-of-town superstore profited 25000 Euros. It's rated the best store because of some of our effective promotions.
Conclusions:
1. The Village store needs to be closed quickly. (or immediately)
2. TheTwo other stores should try to run online business in the next quarter.Very nice Jane!
0 votedNovember 9, 20170Report 05
Introductions:
It is important to inform you that one of our retail stores recently suffered a crisis, where many employees left, and we must analyze what measures we should take to improve this situation.
Findings:
The number of staff members that quit from the Parkside store was higher than those in other stores. In 2008, 20 employees left from Parkside, causing the Parkside store to be understaffed.
Here are some reasons for the staff leaving:
1. They want more training opportunities.
2. They want more paid holidays.
3. They want a bonus system. We could build up several types of bonuses which would include a productivity bonus. In this way, both company and employees could gain more benefits.
Conclusions:
I recommend that we should do something quickly to retain our staff.Hi Jane, I am making corrections on my phone, so I can only delete words and change them. [emoji][emoji] I hope my corrections are helpful. This is a well written memo. Nice work!! Scott (total word count - 131)
0 votedNovember 7, 20170
