Horror Story
It was three o’clock in the morning when the telephone rang. I answered the phone but nobody spoke. After that, I returned to my bed and I tried to sleep again. Ten minutes later, I heard my dog barked in the garage and I looked out my window when I watched five cats at the street.
They must be a cat gang; I could recognize the leader of the gang because two months ago I saw a poster where he was disappeared; her name was Devil. All of the cats looked as if they were possess by a demon. My dogs didn’t stop barking and I couldn’t get out because I didn’t find my keys. The phone rang again and this time I heard a laughing kid on the phone.
I was terrified and I felt like in a dream and I was really in one. I wish my dream didn’t come true. If only I couldn’t get a bad dreams. Next morning, I found my keys on the street. Then, I have a dude if I’m sleepwalker, I will walk at night. I won’t eat big dinners at the night in order to avoid paranormal experiences on dreams.
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Horror Story
It was three o’clock in the morning when the telephone rang. I answered the phone but nobody spoke. After that, I returned to my bed and I tried to sleep again. Ten minutes later, I heard my dog barking in the garage and I looked out my window. I saw five cats in the street.They must be a cat gang; I could recognize the leader of the gang because two months ago I saw a poster where he had disappeared; his name was Devil. All of the cats looked as if they were possessed by a demon. My dogs didn’t stop barking and I couldn’t get out because I couldn't find my keys. The phone rang again and this time I heard a kid laughing kid on the phone.
I was terrified and I felt like I was in a dream and I was really in one. I wish my dream didn’t come true. If only I never experienced bad dreams. The next morning, I found my keys in the street. (Then, I have a dude if I’m sleepwalker, I will walk at night.) << I don't understand the meaning of that sentence. The word "dude" doesn't sound correct.
I won’t eat big dinners at the night in order to avoid paranormal experiences in dreams.
Very nice story! Good luck with your English studies Maga. :-)
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Horror Story
It was three o’clock in the morning when the telephone rang. I answered the phone but nobody spoke. After that, I returned to my bed and I tried to sleep again. Ten minutes later, I heard my dog barked in the garage and I looked out my window when I watched five cats at the street. (i'm not sure if (at) is correct here or not )They must be a cats gang; I could recognize the leader of the gang because two months ago I saw a poster where he was disappeared; her name was Devil. All of the cats looked as if they were possessed by a demon. My dogs didn’t stop barking and I couldn’t get out because I didn’t find my keys. The phone rang again and this time I heard a laughing kid on the phone.
I was terrified and I felt like i'm in a dream and I was really in one. I wish my dream didn’t come true. If only I couldn’t get a bad dreams. Next morning, I found my keys on the street. Then, I have a doubt if I’m a sleepwalker, I will walk at night. I won’t eat big dinners at the night in order to avoid paranormal experiences on dreams.
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It was three o’clock in the morning when the telephone rang. I answered the phone but nobody spoke. After that, I returned to my bed and I tried to sleep again. Ten minutes later, I heard my dog bark in the garage and +when I looked out (of)* my window when I saw five cats on the street. They must be a cat gang; I could recognize the leader of the gang because two months ago I saw a poster where he was that he (had) disappeared; her name was Devil. All of the cats looked as if they were possessed by a demon. My dogs wouldn't stop barking and I couldn’t get out because I couldn't find my keys. The phone rang again and this time I heard a laughing kid on the phone. I was terrified and I felt like in a dream and I was really in one I️ was really I️n a dream(I️'m guessing this I️ what you wanted to say ,correct me I️f wrong) I wish my dream didn’t come true. If only I couldn’t get a bad dreams. The Next morning, I found my keys on the street. Then, I have a dude if I’m sleepwalker, I will walk at night. I won’t eat big dinners in the night in order to avoid paranormal experiences in my dreams.
*optional I️f I️n a formal situation
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