By her broken heart  ( By does not sound quite right here - maybe  "For" or   just put "Her broken heart" )

Once I loved you.  I thought I couldn't love anybody more than I loved you, I believed that I couldn't kiss anyone like I kissed you,  closing my eyes which were always looking at you, but you never realized  of that. I hoped you would returned but I know this is almost impossible.  I know I have to forget you but there is a part of me that cannot do it, actually I do not know if I really want to do it.
You made me feel the most happiness I had ever felt but when you left you made me feel the biggest (largest, deepest) ache I ever had known.

Wednesday

Today I slept at my friend's home. I would like to build up my knee(s)  in the gym but I got up so late. My first class will be History of Art at eleven so now I haven’t time to do it.
Another thing that I will do today is to meet with a friend. She studies psychology at the Salamanca’s university and she needs people to check for her work. She is the best friend of my flat mate. After to my class, I will go to the library to do my hour of study. I have a lot of works to do. For example I have to analyze one text of history. I have to read one book of Prehistory, I have to look at articles about alcohol for sociology for tomorrow, and there is one (signature) do you mean assignment? that I don’t know what to do.
The responsibility is very complicated, I need to organize my time.

Letter

Dear Steve,
If I were you I would go to the school in the centre of town,  because I prefer going where there are a lot of people. and As you know in the centre of town always there are always crowds and you can meet new people. If you choose the school in the countryside you will give a find relaxing landscapes, and you will be in touch with the nature. But maybe you only will only meet people in your school, because you will have to go by bus or train if you want to go to the centre of the city.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Arantxa

Note  A clause starting with "because" needs to be joined to a main clause that it relates to. 

Questions and answers.

When were you happiest?
Every  time I listened to my favorite music.

What is your greatest fear?
Going  blind.

What is your earliest memory?
Maybe I was  playing with my brothers in the house.  or ( Maybe when I was...)

What or who is the greatest love of your life?
Without hesitation ''Star Wars''

Where would you like to live?
Near the ocean.

What is your guiltiest pleasure?
Chocolates.

Who would you invite to your dream dinner party? T
The entire cast of the film ''Star wars'' Luke Skywalker, Han Solo, Chew Baca, Princess Leia, Darth Vader and Master Yoda, R2-D2 and C3PO.

When did you last cry, and why?
The last time was when I saw the movie The force awakens and Han Solo died.

What song would you like played at your funeral?
With The main theme of Star Wars and also with rock music in Spanish and English.

If this is for an assignment I would try to give complete sentences rather than just a few words.

A night in the kitchen

All day  I listen to sounds very very low sounds  but one day I am curious and look outside of my door, and I can see a shadow enter into  the kitchen, but I wanted to know who was there, so I tiptoed  to the kitchen door, and my brother was eating the fruit that we have/brought?  for our grandmother.When he saw me, he stood up and started to pace around the  room.

I strolled over  to him and said "It is bad to eat alone, it is best if you share it with me" ha ha ha, the fruits were delicious.

This story is fictitious, :P
I am reviewing the movement, pace, stroll, tiptoe

The verb tense switches from present to past. It might be better to pick one or the other. Just a suggestion!!

A Person In Your Life Who Has Inspired You

One of the people who has inspired me is Lindsey Stirling who is an exceptional and an unusual / unorthodox  violinist as/ because  she plays and dances at the same time.
 
I had the opportunity to read her book called  “The only pirate at the party” and I learned a little about her history. She started to play when she was a child and she implemented/ added the dancing when she was in high school. She practiced a lot of time and she became really good at it. One day she decided to participate in a reality show called  "American's got Talent". Unfortunately, the judges rejected her and even one of them even said that she sounded like "A bunch of rats being strangled". As one can expect she was devastated. However, she continued playing and working. I should say that she worked in bars, in small party events, etc. But she never gave up.

To sum up, I admire Lindsey because she is authentic and proved them wrong.

Note   I think I tend to use called for objects and named for people.  I changed bit  for. little ." Bit " is not wrong but sounded too informal for a written essay to me. 

Article: Young people and personal values

If you were  young again, would have you have had the same personal values as now? You should think about the answer and read this article.

Nowadays, the personal values of young people are more important in their lives. I think young people are  respectful, and is not selfish ( altruistic ) because of the fact that a lot of people are volunteers during these  years. Thus, young people want to help people who in need it.

To show this, I had talked with my niece who is 16 years old. And She said the most young people are  very helpful  with other people, but there are a minority who want to hurt other people. It is very cruel. (Because of the fact that my friends help people who are hurt ,  and they are thankful to us). **** See below

To conclude, I would like to write that personal values could change when people are older depending  on how were it.( the circumstances) For example, if people hurt you, you would be more stronger. So, your values rise/ advance/  in your adult life.

**** Note  This sentence is a little confusing to read.  Perhaps My friends help those who are hurt and the people are grateful. ?