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By her broken heart Once I loved you I thought I couldn't love anybody more than I loved you, I believed that I couldn't kiss no one like I kissed you closing my eyes which were allways looking to you, but you never realised of that. I hoped you returned but I know this is almost impossible I know I have to forget you but there is a part of me that can not do it, actually I do not know if I really want to do it. You made me feel the biggest happiness I had ever feel but when you left you made me feel the biggest ache I ever had known.

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By her broken heart  ( By does not sound quite right here - maybe  "For" or   just put "Her broken heart" )

Once I loved you.  I thought I couldn't love anybody more than I loved you, I believed that I couldn't kiss anyone like I kissed you,  closing my eyes which were always looking at you, but you never realized  of that. I hoped you would returned but I know this is almost impossible.  I know I have to forget you but there is a part of me that cannot do it, actually I do not know if I really want to do it.
You made me feel the most happiness I had ever felt but when you left you made me feel the biggest (largest, deepest) ache I ever had known.
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Yes, it was something which someone told me had felt.
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Christine, is this a true story? It looks like my own story.. it seems like they are my words...

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