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Article: Young people and personal values If you had been young again, would have you had the same personal values than now? You should think about the answer and read this article. Nowadays, the personal values of young people are more important in their lifes. I think young people is respectfull, and is not selfish. Because of the fact that a lot of people are voluntaries in this years. Thus, young people want to help people who need it. To show this, I had talked with my niece who is 16 years old. And she said the most young people is very helpfull with other people, but there are a minority who want hurt other people. It is very cruel. Because of the fact that my friends help people who is hurted and they are thankfull with us. To conclude, I would like to write the personal values could change when people are older depends on how were it. For example, if people hurt you, you would be more strong. So, your values rise in your adult life.

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Article: Young people and personal values

If you were  young again, would have you have had the same personal values as now? You should think about the answer and read this article.

Nowadays, the personal values of young people are more important in their lives. I think young people are  respectful, and is not selfish ( altruistic ) because of the fact that a lot of people are volunteers during these  years. Thus, young people want to help people who in need it.

To show this, I had talked with my niece who is 16 years old. And She said the most young people are  very helpful  with other people, but there are a minority who want to hurt other people. It is very cruel. (Because of the fact that my friends help people who are hurt ,  and they are thankful to us). **** See below

To conclude, I would like to write that personal values could change when people are older depending  on how were it.( the circumstances) For example, if people hurt you, you would be more stronger. So, your values rise/ advance/  in your adult life.


**** Note  This sentence is a little confusing to read.  Perhaps My friends help those who are hurt and the people are grateful. ?

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