IELTS. General writing task 2.
A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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In our days major part of increasing modern society have all neccesary conditions for comfortable life, such as : personal own transport, organic food, vaccines for health, synthetic clothes and so on. And animals took a big role in that inventions. In this essay we will talk about general issue of the animals in peoples life.
Some experts believe that animals should have the same rights like humans have. For instance, we do not need more use horses like transport in our days. Instead of horses we using vehicles. And, from experts point of view we have to care about wild population. However, in several regions where absolutely no roads, people still use horses like a transport because it is only one type of transport which local society could use there. On one hand using a horse like a transport is a possible way to live in comfort in theese regions, on other hand government has to increase local dotations for new roads.
According to statistics many inventions in the world was discovered by using animals. Vaccines are good example. Many scientists using rats in their experements by testing vaccines on some groops of rats. It convenient, scientists can see the result and in consequense then they can use the right type of vaccine for people in farmacology.
In conсlusion i would like to say that animals should to satisfy various humanity needs and we need to keep them under control. Although we have to keeping them in comfortable conditions like in their wild life. So in our days we have problems more important than animals rights, and government has to make an analyse to solve this issue.
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somewhere about 250 words. IELTS standarts of task 2 general writing.
I wrote this for about 35 minutes. I didnt use any help and google translate or some kind of that.
If somebody had an experience in essay writing - i will be glad for your advises.