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Hello everyone!
My name is Rostislav. I am from Russia, Moscow.
I trying to improve my english language skills. Recently i joined to english classes which prepare for IELTS exam.
There 2 weeks of study. One week passed , one week left. On this study i have been got plenty of useful information , such as tips for essay writing which i never know before, and some tips about speaking test.
I hope that in consequence i will obtain desireable mark on this exam.
I need not less than 5.0 . Well, more the better.
*I wrote this text without any help like google translate. only one correction was - changed "must" on "might".
*desireable might be incorrect , because i dont know how to express my mark wich i wish to obtain.
* I will be glad for you corrections and any responds.
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My first note
Hello everyone!My name is Rostislav. I am from Moscov, Russia, Moscow.
I am trying to improve my Eenglish language skills. Recently i joined to Eenglish classes which to prepare for the IELTS exam.
There are 2 weeks of class study. One week has passed ,and one week is left. On In this study class i have been gotgetting plenty of useful information , such as tips for essay writing which i (never knew/didn't know) before, and some tips about for the speaking test.
I hope that in as a consequence i will obtain a desireable (mark/score) on this exam.
I need not less than 5.0 . Well, more the better.
*I wrote this text without any help like google translate. only one correction was - changed "must" on "might".
*desireable might be incorrect , because i don't know how to express my mark which i wish to obtain.
* I will be glad for to hear your corrections and any respondses.
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My first note
Hello, everyone!My name is Rostislav. I am from Russia, Moscow.
I am trying to improve my English language skills. Recently I have joined to an English class which prepares for the IELTS exam.
There are 2 weeks of study. It's a 2 week course/I have 2 weeks to prepare.
One week passed/elapsed, one week is left. In this study I have been got plenty of useful information, such as: tips for essay writing, which I never knew before, and some tips about the speaking test.
I hope that in result I will obtain/get a desireable mark on this exam.
I need not less than 5.0 . Well, the more the better.
*I wrote this text without any help like google translate. Only one correction was changed "must" on "might".
*desireable might be incorrect, because I dont know how to express my mark which I wish to obtain.
* I will be glad for your corrections and any responses.
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1. Don't forget that English has a string word order: Subject + Verb + Object ...
2. The Contineous structure is: Subject + "to be" + Verb(-ing) + Object ...
I am trying ...
I am swimming ...
he is playing ...
They are singing ...
Don't leave out the auxiliary verb "to be"
3. Impersonal inversion: there is/are
There are two apples, there is a big cat, there is a lamp.
4. It's a stable construction: the ... the ... Just remember that
The more time you will spend, the better.
5. The word "consequence" has a little negative meaning for me. But I am not sure.
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