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A description of my self.
Hello, I'm Anna. I'm from Italy and I live in Naples.
I'm used to being very shy, but I'm also an extrovert.
I love to meet people from all over the world, see how foreign people live, and understand how we are all different but at the same time similar to each other. That's why I'm a student of foreign languages. I study English and Spanish, because are two languages which I really like the way they sound. I chose English because I like its culture, its literature, and the fact that most famous TV series are in English. I chose Spanish because I like its culture too and it seems to be a very colorful and passionate language. What I like about this university is the fact that I am really independent and I play with the language and I can experiment the best way to learn a language.Reading is one of my hobbies. I read all types of books. My favourites are the classic novels, but I also like the modern authors like Murakami and Emma Cline (I am reading a book of hers, and I like it a lot).
I'm also very active. I hate lying on the sofa and watching the TV all the time. I like going out for a walk and going to the gym.
I'm a great fan of classical and rock music. My favourite classic music artist is Einaudi, while my favourite rock band is Muse.
I love listening to classic music while I read, It helps me to concentrate more on what I'm reading and to keep away the noises.Notes:
Watch that your sentences don't contain too many topics.
Otherwise, very well-written!
0 votedSeptember 23, 20170My travel plans
I'll go to Okinawa in Japan with my friends from tomorrow to until October 2nd. I'm excited now but a little bit worried I will forget something. Anyway, I'll go to beach, i'll go swimming, diving, shopping, drinking there. I hope I have a good holiday♪
After that I'll go to Australia for work. I hope I get money and travel all of the world.Notes:
Well-written!
When listing verbs, you can use "... I'll swim, dive, shop, and drink" or "... i'll go swimming, diving, shopping, and drinking", but try and be consistent.0 votedSeptember 22, 20170My Running
It has been 11 days since I starts started to run . In the first 7 days I run ran 2km everyday. From the 8th day to now, 3km. I am doing this not for a thinner body (because I am not fat at all), but for building my perseverance, which is what i am lacking of.
But sometimes I seems to feel a little pain on in my knees, which very freaks me out very much. Maybe that's because of the way I am of my running. So I think perhaps I need to change the way I jog a little bit. a little bit change on my jogging way. Anyway, this time I won't give it up.
You could also use:"...which is what I lack." instead of "... which is what I am lacking."
"... the way I run." instead of "the way I am running."
Otherwise, well-written.0 votedSeptember 22, 20171IELTS Writing- Task 1 ( please help me correct this note book, thank you
The pie charts below shows the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. In 1991, home ownership was the most popular type of housing, accounting for 60%, or more than a half of the pie chart. The next largest sector was social renting, amounting to 23%, or nearly one-third of housings. The remaining homes were mostly private renting ( 11%) and social housing (6%).
Sixteen years later, in 2007, the number of home ownership had risen to 70% or almost three quarters of all homes. This was an increase of 10%, when compared in to/with 1991. Much of the increase in home ownership can be explained by the decrease in social rented homes, which had dropped from 23% to 19%. The percentage of privately rented homes had remained unchanged at 11%. However, there were 5 million more homes in 2007 if compared with 1991. So, the number of rented homes had increased despite the same percentage. Social rented homes had decreased from 6% to 3%, it had still remained the least popular type of housing.Notes:
"The pie chart below shows..."
"The pie charts below show..." - We drop the 's' for plurals.Very well-written.
0 votedSeptember 22, 20171Friday night
Friday night is a very important time zone for me, because if I get to sleep very late (e.g. playing video games, watching YouTube videos), I will feel bad tomorrow.Recently, I wake up at around four A.M. It's a little early for ordinary people, but I feel very good and I don't can't get sleepy all of day.
Anyone, don't invite me to play video games with me, please! (I can play video games in the at afternoon. )Notes:
"Time zone" means a region that observes the universal time standard in relation to other time zones. You could use "time period" appropriately, but "... very important time" is fine too.
It would be more correct to write: "Currently, I wake up at around four A.M" or "Recently, I have been waking up at around four A.M".
Otherwise, your writing is easy to understand.
0 votedSeptember 22, 20171
