My Running
It has been 11 days since I started to run . In the first 7 days I ran 2km everyday. From the 8th day to now , 3km. I am doing this not for a thinner body(because I am not fat at all) ,but for building my perseverance,which is what I lack.
But sometimes I seem to feel a little pain in my knees, which freaks me out very much. Maybe that's because of the way I run. So I think perhaps I need to change the way I jog a little bit. Anyway ,this time I won't give it up.
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My Running
It has been 11 days since I starts started to run . In the first 7 days I run ran 2km everyday. From the 8th day to now, 3km. I am doing this not for a thinner body (because I am not fat at all), but for building my perseverance, which is what i am lacking of.But sometimes I seems to feel a little pain on in my knees, which very freaks me out very much. Maybe that's because of the way I am of my running. So I think perhaps I need to change the way I jog a little bit. a little bit change on my jogging way. Anyway, this time I won't give it up.
You could also use:
"...which is what I lack." instead of "... which is what I am lacking."
"... the way I run." instead of "the way I am running."
Otherwise, well-written.
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