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    A Letter of Invitation Dear prof. Ellen I am Li Ming, a member of the student union of our college. On behalf of the organization committee, we take great honor in inviting you to act as a judge for the coming English speech contest. The possible work may include assessing the contestants’ performance and give a final score in the aspect of announcement, fluency, content as well as the supplementary gesture. The speech contest will be held in the multi-purpose hall at 2 pm on the May 5th. Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
    November 2, 2016
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    。。夺旗。。

    我最近设立了一个网络安全的小组。这个小组的目的是更有效地学网络安全的事情,帮助其他成员和赢夺旗。因为夺旗的小组平常有限,所以我这个小组的限制是15成员。我们已经有十个成员。有的人的优点是网站安全,有的人的优势是二进制开发,有的人的优势是密码学等。

    我最近成立了一个网络安全小组,这个小组的目的是更有效的学习关于网络安全的东西,帮助其他小组成员,然后赢得夺旗(?)。因为对夺旗小组的成员有数量限制,我这个小组的限制是15个成员。我们已经有十个成员,有的人精通网络安全,有的人精通二进制开发,有的人精通密码学,等等。


    我对无线安全和二进制开发很有兴趣。我专注于这些领域。

    我对无线安全和二进制开发很有兴趣,我把精力都集中在这些领域。

    我最近的成就是黑了几个MSP430的微控制器,具体是几个锁。这个行动很好玩,因为我练习汇编语言了。其实,我黑了MSP430之前,没有任何关于微控制器的知识。我一边试试黑它,一边看MSP430的手册。我是这样学的。好笑的事是,我几个周之前听说一个叫深圳IO的游戏很好玩,但玩家玩这游戏之前必须看它的手册。我不知道为什么,但是这激励了我学黑微控制器。

    我最近的成就是黑了几个MSP430的微型控制器,具体来说,是几个锁。 因为我练习过汇编语言了,所以我觉得这件事情很好玩。 其实,在黑了MSP430之前,我没有任何关于微型控制器的知识(我对微型控制器一点儿也不了解)。我一边尝试着黑它,一边看MSP430的手册。这就是我学习的方式。有意思的是,几周之前,我听说有一个叫“深圳IO”的游戏很好玩,但玩家玩这游戏之前必须看它的使用手册。我不知道为什么,但这激励了我学习怎样黑微型控制器。

    我的小组还有五个空位。我们是用Slack联系的。如果你有兴趣的话,那请联系我吧。副作用是你可以练习英语。哈哈。

    我的小组还有五个空缺。 我们是用Slack交流的。 如果你有兴趣的话,那就请联系我把! 好处是你可以练习英语!哈哈。


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    October 23, 2016
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    Next translation challenge

    这一次 试着翻译了这个文章的第一段:
    http://www.3ders.org//articles/20161021-liquid-factory-reebok-uses-liquid-material-3d-printing-to-bring-sneaker-creation-back-to-us.html,
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    Liquid Factory: Reebok uses liquid material 3D printing to bring sneaker creation back to US
    液体工厂: Reebock 将用液体材料3D打印, 把运动鞋的生产带回美国


    While 3D printed outfits and accessories have been revolutionizing fashion runways all over the world, shoe developers have been struggling a bit more with the 3D printing challenge. And that’s very unfortunate, as 3D printing could offer a solution to the ever-growing mountain of non- recyclable shoes we are assembling. The problem is that 3D printing something that is comfortable, durable, fashionable and perfectly fitting is surprisingly difficult.

    即使设计人员早就开始用以3D 大印制造的服装和配饰在全球伸展台进行时常革命,在打印鞋子方面开发,人员目前仍然面临技术挑战,需要继续奋斗。这情况非常可惜, 应为3D打印可以提共关于人们需要的越来越多循环使用不了的鞋子所致的污染问题的处理方法。难度就在于打印出来的鞋必须符合,舒适,经久,时髦和合体要求。

    ... 哎就这么一句,让我翻了半天。题目说目前还是太难了,不知道的生词太多. 但是不难,也不能叫做挑战,对吧?

    当3D打印服饰使全球的时尚T台彻底变革的同时,鞋业研发人员仍然面临着更多的3D打印(技术)方面的挑战。然而这是非常不幸的,因为3D打印可以为(处理)我们日渐堆积如山不可回收的鞋子提供一个解决方案 。问题在于,使3D打印的物件舒适、耐用、时髦与完全合身是极其困难的。


    然而不幸的是,
    3D打印的确可以为处理我们日渐堆积如山的不可回收的鞋子提供一个解决方案 。但问题在于,要使利用3D技术打印出的东西舒适,耐用,时尚又完全合身是非常困难的。


    你真的好厉害! 我加了一些口语的不可解释为什么的词。 确实是挑战!


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    October 23, 2016
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    我介绍自己

    你好!我叫宋望望。我是美国人但是我现在在中国住。我在河南驻马店的黄淮学院是当英语老师。我很喜欢教学英语教英语。我有空闲时间时,我喜欢学习言语学语言,打篮球,唱歌。我没有上过中文课;我觉得我的朋友们是很好的老师!我很高兴认识你们,谢谢你们纠正我的错误!


    :-D  你的朋友真的是很好的老师 你的中文很好

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    October 23, 2016
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    destination is another starting point The picture above portrays a provoking scene in which a boy is running on to the finish line, with a signal on the ground in front of the finish line, saying "the starting point". With the title saying "destination is another starting point", this picture, I suppose, want to unveil the truth that reaching an achievement doesn’t mean anything but another stage of our life. Life is similar to an endless stair. That is to say, on its own is never satisfied, constantly beat ourselves, beyond ourselves and to achieve new goals, to reach a new level. The situation we can always find around us that people who indulge in his achievement can never catch up with the changing society is appalling as well as alarming. Thomas Edison is living proof that he embraced a struggling life and never stop challenging himself. Regarding every invention as a new challenge instead of the end of his life as inventors, he devoted all his life in his career and finally made him the most well-known inventor as well as an inspiring figure in 19th century. We can learn from Edison that the key point to success is not just settle for a couple of trophies and always desire to keep improving. In one word, the only constant in life beyond ourselves can we find the self-worth.
    October 23, 2016
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    The Flower in Greenhouse The flower in greenhouse cannot survive from brutal nature, just as it portrayed in the picture above. Thanks to the greenhouse, the beautiful plant can enjoy a peaceful time when there is heavy rain outside. If the plant is directly exposed to nature, it will die within imagination. Now something similar could be found in current society. The drawing made a sharp critique on the phenomenon that some parents help their kids do all the things that supposed to be finished by their own and prevent their kids from experiencing evitable difficulties and failure in life, out of what they called “love”. The intended meaning, the picture conveyed is that anyone who never encounter loss will fail to survive from challenging society is appalling as well as alarming. With the overprotection from parents, children consequently will take the protection and love for granted and refuse to make risks, from which they may learn a lot. Given all this, something must be done for parents like this to make a change so as to lead their children a brilliant future. Firstly, changing attitude towards failure and difficulty is a promising start. Just as the old saying goes, happiness comes not keep away from misery but live with it. Moreover, it is crucial to encourage children to take an initiative to leave their comfort zone and try to solve problems by themselves. Only in this way can they establish a sense of responsibility and live an independent life.
    October 19, 2016
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    很刺激的电影

    我刚才看了一部动作片的电影了,是从印度呢(尼)西亚来的(是印度尼西亚的)。   (我刚才看了一部印度尼西亚的动作片。)

    首先(一开始,)(有)一个人在家里做运动,他准备去工作。他的太太躺在床上休息,因为她是孕妇。

    他出门以前,对他的爸爸说“我带他回家”。

    接着,我们发现他住在雅加达而且他是警察,(他的任务是)跟同事们一起去找坏人。

    在一个很大的车里一个人表达(在说)他们的计划。     

    有一个很大的(很坏的)坏人,做很多毒品的生意。

    所有的电影在一个很大的楼里,这座楼是坏老板的家。警察来的时候,毒品老板(正)在办公室做他自己的事情—杀人。

    有很多动作到我们发现好警察的弟弟(也)在这里工作。

    好警察对他的弟弟说应该的回家。 (好警察劝他弟弟回家。)(劝:quan4 )

    但是弟弟想继续做他的坏工作。

    然后毒品老板知道弟弟认识这个警察,所以把刀切他的手。(用刀切弟弟的手/把弟弟的手切了。)

    然后弟弟的同事打了他的肚子一些,突然哥哥来,帮忙弟弟,杀坏同事。

    警察的老板也获得毒品的老板, (警察抓住了坏人。)

    但是我们发现警察的老板也是坏蛋,因为以前毒品老板给了警察很多钱。

    坏蛋的警察杀了坏毒品老板,也想自己杀自杀但是子弹(用)完了。

    最后,好警察获得坏蛋的警察,(好警察抓住了坏警察,)

    跟一个同事一起陪他回城市,但是好警察让他的弟弟自己出去。



    (1) 自杀      动作片

    (2)劝:quan4   妈妈劝爸爸不要吸烟。 你工作很久了,我劝你休息一下。

    (3)帮-帮忙     帮: 帮 sb.  V.   帮我写作业   帮妈妈打扫房间    /   帮忙: 请你帮忙。 我来帮忙。  (没有someboby在后面)

    (4)了:  我刚才看了一部动作片。  吃了饭,洗了澡。  坏警察杀了好警察。   好警察抓住了坏警察。

    (5)正:  我正吃饭呢!  我正写作业呢!  别说话!妈妈正睡觉呢!   /    我正在吃饭。  我正在写作业。  别说话,妈妈正在睡觉。


    写的很好! 加油~ ↖(^ω^)↗    ps. 电影叫什么名字?

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    August 25, 2016
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    the cultural hot-pot The increasing contacts between countries in recent decades provided the contemporary society with the spiritual wealth from each cultural group. Just as it depicted in the drawing, people are enjoying the cultural hot-pot together, with not only Chinese traditional spiritual values like Confucianism and Taoist but also the masterpieces from Shakespeare which are an essential integral of western culture. No one will deny that the cultural hot-pot produced by international contacts is a particular trait of the modern world. Each coin has two sides and the phenomenon is no exception. For one thing, people in the contemporary era are easier to get access to different ideals or works, on top of that, they will broaden their horizons as well as breaking the cultural barriers before them when they make friends with foreigners. For another thing, exposed to different cultures which might opposite to each other, the receiver will confuse and feel awkward in face of cultural conflicts. In general, the cultural hot-pot is an evident expression of the trend of increasingly multination intercourse, to which each person, even each country can't ignored. It is of great significance to take positive attitude towards it. That is, everyone is obliged to hold the opening view as well as improving their ability of discarding their dross and selecting their essence in order to make full use of the good-tasting hot-pot.
    August 25, 2016
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