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destination is another starting point The picture above portrays a provoking scene in which a boy is running on to the finish line, with a signal on the ground in front of the finish line, saying "the starting point". With the title saying "destination is another starting point", this picture, I suppose, want to unveil the truth that reaching an achievement doesn’t mean anything but another stage of our life. Life is similar to an endless stair. That is to say, on its own is never satisfied, constantly beat ourselves, beyond ourselves and to achieve new goals, to reach a new level. The situation we can always find around us that people who indulge in his achievement can never catch up with the changing society is appalling as well as alarming. Thomas Edison is living proof that he embraced a struggling life and never stop challenging himself. Regarding every invention as a new challenge instead of the end of his life as inventors, he devoted all his life in his career and finally made him the most well-known inventor as well as an inspiring figure in 19th century. We can learn from Edison that the key point to success is not just settle for a couple of trophies and always desire to keep improving. In one word, the only constant in life beyond ourselves can we find the self-worth.

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Destination is another starting point


The picture above portrays a thought-provoking scene in which a boy runs to a finish line with the words "the starting point" written in front of the finish line. The title reads "Destination is another Starting Point." This picture wants to convey a metaphor about the different stages in life.


Life is like an endless staircase. We must never remain satisfied. We must constantly surpass our expectations, go beyond our limits to achieve new goals and reach new levels. (SiSi: You do not have a good transition into the next sentence. )However, we find many appalling and alarming situations in which people indulge in their own achievements without the slightest concern for the forever changing society [around them]. {This sentence does not fit in this writing. Everything that you write about is positive except this one sentence}


Thomas Edison embodied the human spirit to embrace life's struggles and never stop challenging ourselves. He envisioned every invention as a new challenge, not a culmination of his life as an inventor. He devoted his life to a career that made him the most well-known inventor of the 19th century. We learn from Edison that the key to success is not to settle for trophies, but maintain our desire to improve. In a word, the only constant in life beyond ourselves is self-worth.

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