The Flower in Greenhouse
The flower in greenhouse cannot survive from brutal nature, just as it portrayed in the picture above. Thanks to the greenhouse, the beautiful plant can enjoy a peaceful time when there is heavy rain outside. If the plant is directly exposed to nature, it will die within imagination. Now something similar could be found in current society.
The drawing made a sharp critique on the phenomenon that some parents help their kids do all the things that supposed to be finished by their own and prevent their kids from experiencing evitable difficulties and failure in life, out of what they called “love”. The intended meaning, the picture conveyed is that anyone who never encounter loss will fail to survive from challenging society is appalling as well as alarming. With the overprotection from parents, children consequently will take the protection and love for granted and refuse to make risks, from which they may learn a lot.
Given all this, something must be done for parents like this to make a change so as to lead their children a brilliant future. Firstly, changing attitude towards failure and difficulty is a promising start. Just as the old saying goes, happiness comes not keep away from misery but live with it. Moreover, it is crucial to encourage children to take an initiative to leave their comfort zone and try to solve problems by themselves. Only in this way can they establish a sense of responsibility and live an independent life.
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The Flower in Greenhouse
The flower in a greenhouse cannot survive from brutal nature, just as it is portrayed in the picture above. Thanks to the greenhouse, the beautiful plant can enjoy a peaceful time when there is heavy rain outside. If the plant is directly exposed to nature, it will die within our imagination. Now something similar could be found in current society.The drawing made makes a sharp critique on the phenomenon that some parents help their kids do all the things that they are supposed to finish be finished on by their own and prevent their kids from experiencing inevitable evitable difficulties and failures in life, out of what they called call “love”. The intended meaning that the picture conveys conveyed is, that anyone who never encounters loss will fail to survive from a challenging society, is appalling as well as alarming. With the overprotection from parents, children consequently will take the that protection and love for granted and refuse to make risks, from which they may learn a lot.
Given all this, something must be done for parents like this to make a change so as to lead their children to a brilliant future. Firstly, changing attitude towards failure and difficulty is a promising start. Just as the old saying goes, happiness comes not by keeping away from misery but live living with it. Moreover, it is crucial to encourage children to take an initiative to leave their comfort zone and try to solve problems by themselves. Only in this way can they establish a sense of responsibility and live an independent life.
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The Flower in Greenhouse
The hot house plant cannot survive in the wild, just as we see in the picture above. Thanks to the greenhouse, the beautiful plant can enjoy a peaceful time when there is heavy rain outside. If the plant is directly exposed to nature, it will die immediately. Now something similar happens in today's world.The drawing critiques sharply that some parents make their kids dependent and shield them from living the inevitable difficulties and failures in life, out of what they called “love”. The meaning the picture conveys is that anyone who always wins will fail to survive from a challenging society is appalling as well as alarming. Being overly protected, children will thus take the protection and love for granted and refuse to take risks, from which they might otherwise learn a lot.
Given all this, something must be done so parents like this change so as to lead their children to a brilliant future. Firstly, changing one's attitude towards failure and difficulty is a promising start. Just as the old saying goes, happiness comes not from keeping away from misery but from living with it. Moreover, it is crucial to encourage children to take an initiative to leave their comfort zone and try to solve problems by themselves. Only in this way can they establish a sense of responsibility and live an independent life.
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