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    30天中文写作挑战 (21/30) – 宠物

    在法国，人们养有宠物是很常常见的事
    最流行的宠物是狗、猫和鱼
    有时人们会养些有些特别的宠物， 例如老鼠，爬虫还是或鸟类。
    在我童年的时候，（or you can use"小时候",it will let u speak more like a Chinese, but"我童年的时候"is also a good sentence. ）姐姐和我在嘉年华(or游乐场)里赢得了两个条金鱼（only use"赢"will lead to ambiguity,like you defeat a goldfish.But"赢得"is through a way to get sth.）
    卖家告诉了我妈妈它们三个月以后会逝去世， 可是它们活了10年。（“逝世”means "die" ,but it also means "sacrifice",I think "去世"is better.In our daily life,seller rarely says"它们三个月后会去世",it's a little formal. I think your saying"the gold fish would die in three month" is  the goldfish only can live 3 month,so seller will tell you"它们的寿命有三个月"or“它们只能活三个月”）
    之后不久后，在我生日的时候，朋友送给了我一只个仓鼠。
    我父母不可以没办法拒绝， （“不可以”looks mandatory,and"没办法"=“无法”,it just a  more familiar expression.）所以我们保持留下了它。
    大家都很喜欢它， 可是它总归最终还是逝世死了。（u can use "去世", too）
    现在，因为我的套房(or公寓)很小，所以我没有宠物。(we like to say"apartment" as"公寓"，but “套房”is right.)
    我希望在将来能有一个条狗


    ----I change a way to correct your passage...Is that more clear?

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    June 19, 2016
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    30天中文写作挑战 (17/30) – 因特网

    在我出生的时候， 没有因特网。
    在法国，我们有一个叫"Minitel"的网络， 它能让我们从手机了解新闻。（we often think “电话” is the home phone,it can't connect the internet.But the "电话号码" can be your own telephone number.）
    它很贵而且很难用。（“它”or"这个东西" usually refer to "it"）
    在我要准备一些学校作业的时候， 我会去到图书馆。（”学业“usually mean the course you're study now,knowledge, learning, profession, etc.）
    因特网极大地改变了我们查找信息的方式。现在，你可以用因特网找到任何东西。（“地”is the verb's"的"）
    在法国，最流行的搜索引擎是Google。
    人们常说"Google是你的朋友"，它的意思是Google可以给你答案。
    我觉得百度是在中国最常用的搜寻引擎。
    网上，有很多无偿的资料可以让你学到想学的东西。
    并且， 你现在可以见到来自世界各地的朋友。
    我很高兴能有这样机会。（“愉快” using fewer in the middle of the sentence. “高兴”&“开心”are its synonyms.)


    -------In one passage,you have to use the same person narratives，like“我们”

    I think highlight can let you see it faster,in some sentences I just change the order  : )

    -------And we often call the "Internat" as "互联网" now,"因特网" is unfashionable. = v =

    Hi, today I want to talk about the Internet. Thank you for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

    When I was born, there was no internet. In France, we had a network called “Minitel”, which allowed to get news from the phone. It was really expensive and difficult to use. When I had to prepare some school work, I would go to the library. The internet has really changed the way we seek for information. Now, you can find anything with Internet. In France, the most popular search engine is “Google”. People will often say “Google is your friend”, meaning that Google can give you the answer. I believe that Baidu is the most used in China. There are a lot of free resources on the internet to learn about anything. Moreover, you can meet friends from all over the world. I am very glad to have such an opportunity.

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    June 15, 2016
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    我上大学了！

    今年我要上大学了。

    我先自己学习汉语，然后再去中国。（"先" & “再”is in that order.）

    去年我在北京学习了一个月的汉语。但是我感觉我的中文语法不太好。（Chinese used to say "my XXX" & “my adj. XXX”→eg.“我的语法” “我的中文语法”）

    我多大了？六十一岁！（Well...in this sentence ,don't use much "我" will be better.It won't look so repetition.）（And I have a same question with Alice......u really 61 years old???Σ( ° △ °|||)︴)

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    June 15, 2016
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    June 14, 2016
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    30天中文写作挑战 (16/30) – 运动

    我不是一个经常运动的人，不太喜欢锻炼。
    我有点矮， 【Well Chinese always use adjective to make the sentence more fluently.You're just a little short not very,right??】所以我不喜欢团队运动，因为别人不给我传球。【Chinese‘s “because”&"so" can show together. : )】
    在我年轻的时候，我尝试过几个运动， 例如体操，舞蹈，柔道，攀岩 ……【“例如or比如”all mean "for example" .But "比如" is describe something similar but actually different ,more like compare with sth.  "例如"just a few examples to prove your point of view】
    可是我不曾发现对我来说最棒的运动。【perfect is“完美”，but I think "perfect sport for you" is most suitable sport for u and u think it's excellent.Then I change your words.】

    现在我每星期练两次空手道。
    我喜欢空手道因为它兼容了战斗和沉思。
    今年我想要拿到我的橙色腰带。


    ------Your sentences are good~: )Hope you get your orange belt this year~~~

    Hi, today I would like to talk a bit about sports. Thank you in advance for your kind help! Here is the English translation of the text in case my Chinese isn't clear enough :

    I am not a very sporty person, I don’t really like to work out. I am short, so I don’t like team sports as the other people won’t give me the ball. When I was young, I tried several sports, such as gymnastic, dance, judo, climbing … But I have never find the perfect sport for me. Now I practice karate twice a week. I like karate because it combines combat and meditation. This year I want to have my orange belt.

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    June 14, 2016
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