30天中文写作挑战 (17/30) – 因特网

在我出生的时候， 没有因特网。
在法国，我们有了一个网叫"Minitel"， 可以通过电话线路获取新闻。
Minitel真是又贵又很难用。
为了准备一个学校作业， 我只好到图书馆去（使用Minitel）。
因特网真的是改变了人们获取信息的途径。现在，任何信息你都可以通过因特网获取。
在法国，最流行的搜寻引擎是Google。
人们常说"Google是你的朋友"，它的意思是Google可以回答你。
我觉得百度是中国最常用的搜寻引擎。
网上，有很多免费的资料可以让你学习。
并且， 你可以和世界各地的朋友交流。
我很高兴能有这样的机会。




Hi, today I want to talk about the Internet. Thank you for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

When I was born, there was no internet. In France, we had a network called “Minitel”, which allowed to get news from the phone. It was really expensive and difficult to use. When I had to prepare some school work, I would go to the library. The internet has really changed the way we seek for information. Now, you can find anything with Internet. In France, the most popular search engine is “Google”. People will often say “Google is your friend”, meaning that Google can give you the answer. I believe that Baidu is the most used in China. There are a lot of free resources on the internet to learn about anything. Moreover, you can meet friends from all over the world. I am very glad to have such an opportunity.

30天中文写作挑战 (17/30) – 因特网

在我出生的时候， 没有因特网。
在法国，我们有一个叫"Minitel"的网络， 它能让我们从手机了解新闻。（we often think “电话” is the home phone,it can't connect the internet.But the "电话号码" can be your own telephone number.）
它很贵而且很难用。（“它”or"这个东西" usually refer to "it"）
在我要准备一些学校作业的时候， 我会去到图书馆。（”学业“usually mean the course you're study now,knowledge, learning, profession, etc.）
因特网极大地改变了我们查找信息的方式。现在，你可以用因特网找到任何东西。（“地”is the verb's"的"）
在法国，最流行的搜索引擎是Google。
人们常说"Google是你的朋友"，它的意思是Google可以给你答案。
我觉得百度是在中国最常用的搜寻引擎。
网上，有很多无偿的资料可以让你学到想学的东西。
并且， 你现在可以见到来自世界各地的朋友。
我很高兴能有这样机会。（“愉快” using fewer in the middle of the sentence. “高兴”&“开心”are its synonyms.)

-------In one passage,you have to use the same person narratives，like“我们”

I think highlight can let you see it faster,in some sentences I just change the order  : )

-------And we often call the "Internat" as "互联网" now,"因特网" is unfashionable. = v =

Hi, today I want to talk about the Internet. Thank you for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

When I was born, there was no internet. In France, we had a network called “Minitel”, which allowed to get news from the phone. It was really expensive and difficult to use. When I had to prepare some school work, I would go to the library. The internet has really changed the way we seek for information. Now, you can find anything with Internet. In France, the most popular search engine is “Google”. People will often say “Google is your friend”, meaning that Google can give you the answer. I believe that Baidu is the most used in China. There are a lot of free resources on the internet to learn about anything. Moreover, you can meet friends from all over the world. I am very glad to have such an opportunity.

30天中文写作挑战 (17/30) – 因特网

在我出生的时候，还 没有因特网。
在法国，我们有了一个网叫"Minitel"， 准人从电话有新闻。可以让人们从电话里接收新闻。
这很贵了，而且还是很难用了。
为了要准备一个学业准备作业， 我到图书馆去了。
因特网真的改变了人们找消息资料的途径。现在，你跟在因特网都上可以找到任何资料。
在法国，最流行的搜寻搜索引擎是Google。
人们常说"Google是你的朋友"，它的意思是Google可以回答你任何问题。
我觉得百度是中国最常用的搜寻搜索引擎。
网上，有很多无偿免费的资料，所以你可以学习什么任何的东西。
并且， 如今而且，你可以见面和世界各地的朋友见面。
我很愉快高兴有这样的机会。




Hi, today I want to talk about the Internet. Thank you for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

When I was born, there was no internet. In France, we had a network called “Minitel”, which allowed to get news from the phone. It was really expensive and difficult to use. When I had to prepare some school work, I would go to the library. The internet has really changed the way we seek for information. Now, you can find anything with Internet. In France, the most popular search engine is “Google”. People will often say “Google is your friend”, meaning that Google can give you the answer. I believe that Baidu is the most used in China. There are a lot of free resources on the internet to learn about anything. Moreover, you can meet friends from all over the world. I am very glad to have such an opportunity.

30天中文写作挑战 (17/30) – 因特网

在我出生的时候， 没有因特网。
在法国，我们有了一个网叫"Minitel"， 准许人们从电话里获得有新闻。
这很贵了还是很难用了。
为了要准备一个作学业， 我得/不得不到图书馆去了。
因特网真改变人们找消息的方式。现在，你在跟因特网上任何东西/什么都可以找到。
在法国，最流行的搜寻引擎是Google。
人们常说"Google是你的朋友"，它的意思是Google可以回答你。
我觉得百度是中国最用的搜寻引擎。
网上，有很多无偿的资料，所以你可以学习任何知识什么。/所以什么你都可以学习。
而且并且， 如今，你可以会见见面世界各地的朋友。/你可以与世界各地的朋友见面/会面
我很愉快有这样的机会。




Hi, today I want to talk about the Internet. Thank you for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

When I was born, there was no internet. In France, we had a network called “Minitel”, which allowed to get news from the phone. It was really expensive and difficult to use. When I had to prepare some school work, I would go to the library. The internet has really changed the way we seek for information. Now, you can find anything with Internet. In France, the most popular search engine is “Google”. People will often say “Google is your friend”, meaning that Google can give you the answer. I believe that Baidu is the most used in China. There are a lot of free resources on the internet to learn about anything. Moreover, you can meet friends from all over the world. I am very glad to have such an opportunity.

30天中文写作挑战 (17/30) – 因特网

当我出生的时候，法国还没有因特网。
我们只有一个叫"Minitel"的网络，它可以让我们用手机接收新闻信息。
这个网络收费很昂贵，并且使用起来比较困难。
当要准备一些学习资料的时候， 我就得去图书馆查询资料。
因特网已经真正的改变了我们寻求资料的方式，现在，你可以通过因特网找到你想要的任何资料。
在法国，最流行的搜寻引擎是Google。
人们常说"Google是你的朋友"，它的意思是Google可以给你需要的答案。
我觉得百度是中国使用最多的搜寻引擎。
在网上，有很多免费的资料可以让你去学习一切你想学的东西。
 如今，你可以通过因特网见到你世界各地的朋友。
我很高兴。我们有这样的机会使用它。

ps:l hope l can help you ...


Hi, today I want to talk about the Internet. Thank you for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

When I was born, there was no internet. In France, we had a network called “Minitel”, which allowed to get news from the phone. It was really expensive and difficult to use. When I had to prepare some school work, I would go to the library. The internet has really changed the way we seek for information. Now, you can find anything with Internet. In France, the most popular search engine is “Google”. People will often say “Google is your friend”, meaning that Google can give you the answer. I believe that Baidu is the most used in China. There are a lot of free resources on the internet to learn about anything. Moreover, you can meet friends from all over the world. I am very glad to have such an opportunity.