30天中文写作挑战 (16/30) – 运动

现在我每星期练两次空手道。
我喜欢空手道因为它兼容了战斗和沉思。
今年我想要拿到我的橙色腰带。


------Your sentences are good~: )Hope you get your orange belt this year~~~

Hi, today I would like to talk a bit about sports. Thank you in advance for your kind help! Here is the English translation of the text in case my Chinese isn't clear enough :

I am not a very sporty person, I don’t really like to work out. I am short, so I don’t like team sports as the other people won’t give me the ball. When I was young, I tried several sports, such as gymnastic, dance, judo, climbing … But I have never find the perfect sport for me. Now I practice karate twice a week. I like karate because it combines combat and meditation. This year I want to have my orange belt.

我不是一个常运动的人，不太喜欢锻炼。

我不是一个常常运动的人，不太喜欢锻炼。

因为我矮， 所以我不喜欢团队运动既然人不给我球。

因为我矮， 所以我不喜欢团队运动，其他人都不给我球。

青年的时候，我尝试几个运动， 比如体操，舞蹈，柔道，磐石 ……

青年的时候，我尝试过几个运动， 比如体操，舞蹈，柔道，攀石 ……

可是我不曾发现我完备的运动。

可是我未曾发现完美的运动合我。

现在我每星期两次练空手道。

现在我每星期练两次空手道。

我喜欢空手道因为总战斗和沉思。

我喜欢空手道，因为包含战斗和思考。

今年我要有我的橙色腰带。

我今年要有橙色腰带。

30天中文写作挑战 (16/30) – 运动

30天中文写作挑战 (16/30) – 运动

as可以翻译成：当.......的时候，也可以翻译成：因为，我把横线上的状语提前了，如果翻成因为有点重复，所以我就翻成当......时。
青年的时候，我尝试(过)几个运动， 比如体操，舞蹈，柔道，磐石 ……
可是我不曾发现我完全适合我的运动。
现在我每星期练空手道两次。
我喜欢空手道，因为它结合了战斗和沉思。/因为它把战斗和沉思结合起来

combine结合了......和......，/将/把......和.......结合起来。
今年我要有我的橙色腰带。有可以换成获得，不换也行。




Hi, today I would like to talk a bit about sports. Thank you in advance for your kind help! Here is the English translation of the text in case my Chinese isn't clear enough :

I am not a very sporty person, I don’t really like to work out. I am short, so I don’t like team sports as the other people won’t give me the ball. When I was young, I tried several sports, such as gymnastic, dance, judo, climbing … But I have never find the perfect sport for me. Now I practice karate twice a week. I like karate because it combines combat and meditation. This year I want to have my orange belt.

30天中文写作挑战 (16/30) – 运动