你们好，我叫伊丽娜！我今年二十岁。我想告诉你们一点（一些）关于我在学校和大学的学习（的事）。说实在的，当我（在）中学时，我不太喜欢学习。因为我不喜欢大多老师和学校科目。我尤其讨厌数学和物理学。然而，我从来（一直以来）喜欢学英语，因为这个科目对我（而言/来说）很有意思。我们学校的英语老师也非常好的。上课时，老师给我们解释了很难的英语语法和（并且）她帮助我们积累词汇。我非常感谢她。 毕业后，我进了大学。 现在我是语言学院的学生。除了英语以外，我还学汉语和西班牙语。我很高兴在大学学习,因为我的同学都喜欢学习外语，就像我一样。我认为大学过程比中学的更有意思。大学教授都讲得很清楚，我很尊重他们。所以为了他们的表扬我总是学习很努力。毕业后，我打算去中国留学。我已经报名了参加HSK四级考试。祝我好运！ Correct my mistakes,please! Thank you.

写得很好啦！祝你好运！

第一批新芽 The first crop of sprouts

别去(不去)旅游但留在家里最好的事情之一，那就是我可以自己做饭，不必靠别人替我做饭。生活在英国，我特别幸运，因为有一种蔬菜，我在中国从来没有看过。这些蔬菜像微型卷心菜，称为“抱子甘蓝”，通常缩写为“芽”。 昨天我在我的花园里收获了今季节(当季)第一批新芽。

One of the best things about not traveling, but staying at home is that I can cook for myself, not rely on others to cook for me. Living in England, I am especially lucky, because here we have a vegetable that I have never come across in China. These vegetables are like miniture cabbages, they are called 'brussel sprouts', often shortened to 'sprouts'. Yesterday I harvested my first crop of sprouts from my garden.

"别“is usually used for the purpose of warning,sugeestion, order and some strong intentions.

Examples:

别走，你的工作还没做完！（warning）

别去那个危险的地方。  （suggestion）

These Chinese sentences are quite similar to imperative sentence in English with a "Don't" at the beginning.

30天中文写作挑战 (5/30) - 我的套房

（因为）我住在巴黎附近，所以（房租）很贵。（It's fine to use 因为...所以... at the same time in Chinese）
我和我朋友住在（有）两间屋子的套房（里）。
一间屋子是厨房和客厅。我喜欢做饭但是我没有（时间）。（屋里）有一张大的桌子和（几个）凳子， 所以（邀请朋友）很方便。
我们有一个电视机，可是我们不（常看）。我宁（愿）用我的电脑。书架有很多书， 因为我爱好看书。
第二（间）屋子是的卧房。双人床（几乎占据所有）地方。（这间屋）也有小的浴室。
我希望（可以快点）搬去到三间屋子的套房。（不）久后，我要住在（带有花园的）房子（里）。（在...里，在...外，"在" is usually conbined with "里,外,前,后".）



Today is day 5 of my writing challenge. Thank you in advance for your corrections ! Here the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :

Right now I live near Paris, so renting a flat is very expensive. My friend and I are living in a two-rooms apartment. The first room is composed of the kitchen and the living room. I like to cook but I don’t have enough time to do so. There is a big table and several stools, so it is very convenient when we invite friends over. We have a television set, but we don’t watch it a lot. I prefer to use my computer. The book shelf is full of books, because I love to read books. The second room is a bedroom. The double bed takes almost all of the space. There is also a small bathroom. I hope that we will be able to move soon to a three rooms apartment. In the future, I want to live in a house with a garden.

Chinese sentences 11 (longer phrases + tenses)

I like to learn Chinese because the Chinese language and culture are so unique.
我喜欢学习中文因为中国的语言和文化是如此独特.

I just had a Chinese lesson.--> 我刚才上了中国（中文）课
I asked a lot of questions.--> 我问了很多的问题.

I love your light brown hat because when you wear it, you look even more cute.
我爱你浅棕色的帽子，因为当你戴上它，你看起来更可爱。

You can try it, but it is very unhealthy. --> 你可以尝试，但它是非常不健康.

Sometimes I like to eat it --> 有时我喜欢吃它

I am happy every day because I have you in my life --> 每一天我很高兴的每一天，因为我的的生命中有你。

I try to eat with chopsticks. 我尝试用筷子吃饭.

We can go for a walk and afterwards cook dinner, how about?
我们可以先去散步, 之后做晚餐, 怎么样？
-->here I want it to be a suggestion but I am not sure how to phrase it correctly :S.