第一批新芽 The first crop of sprouts
别去旅游但留在家里最好的事情之一，那就是我可以自己做饭，不必靠别人替我做饭。生活在英国，我特别幸运，因为有一种蔬菜，我在中国从来没有看过。这些蔬菜像微型卷心菜，称为“抱子甘蓝”，通常缩写为“芽”。 昨天我在我的花园里收获了今季节第一批新芽。
One of the best things about not traveling, but staying at home is that I can cook for myself, not rely on others to cook for me. Living in England, I am especially lucky, because here we have a vegetable that I have never come across in China. These vegetables are like miniture cabbages, they are called 'brussel sprouts', often shortened to 'sprouts'. Yesterday I harvested my first crop of sprouts from my garden.
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这个菜在北京有卖的, 我吃过, 很好吃. :)
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第一批新芽 The first crop of sprouts
别去(不去)旅游但留在家里最好的事情之一，那就是我可以自己做饭，不必靠别人替我做饭。生活在英国，我特别幸运，因为有一种蔬菜，我在中国从来没有看过。这些蔬菜像微型卷心菜，称为“抱子甘蓝”，通常缩写为“芽”。 昨天我在我的花园里收获了今季节(当季)第一批新芽。One of the best things about not traveling, but staying at home is that I can cook for myself, not rely on others to cook for me. Living in England, I am especially lucky, because here we have a vegetable that I have never come across in China. These vegetables are like miniture cabbages, they are called 'brussel sprouts', often shortened to 'sprouts'. Yesterday I harvested my first crop of sprouts from my garden.
"别“is usually used for the purpose of warning,sugeestion, order and some strong intentions.
Examples:
别走，你的工作还没做完！（warning）
别去那个危险的地方。 （suggestion）
These Chinese sentences are quite similar to imperative sentence in English with a "Don't" at the beginning.
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前面的人已经修改得很好了。
还有一个小问题 ：
除了 “今天”“今日”，“今年 ” ， 别的时间，在现代汉语里不可以用“今”。可以用“这个”。
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第一批新芽 The first crop of sprouts
不去旅游而且留在家里最好的事情之一就是我可以自己做饭，不必靠别人替我做饭。生活在英国，我特别幸运，因为有一种蔬菜，我在中国从来没有看过。这些蔬菜像微型卷心菜，称为“抱子甘蓝”，通常缩写为“芽”。 昨天我在我的花园里收获了今季节第一批新芽。One of the best things about not traveling, but staying at home is that I can cook for myself, not rely on others to cook for me. Living in England, I am especially lucky, because here we have a vegetable that I have never come across in China. These vegetables are like miniture cabbages, they are called 'brussel sprouts', often shortened to 'sprouts'. Yesterday I harvested my first crop of sprouts from my garden.
In this sentence, we don't translate "but" into "但". Because of when we use "但" ,it means the truth is not like your expectation
Ex. I hope It's suuny ,but it's rainy now. 我希望今天是晴天，但現在下雨了
In your sentence, the two thing in your sentence is truth. You are not travaling and you are staying at home
So we use "而且" not "但"
Hope this helps :)
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第一批新芽 The first crop of sprouts
别去旅游但留在家里最好的事情之一，那就是我可以自己做饭，不必靠别人替我做饭。生活在英国，我特别幸运，因为有一种蔬菜，我在中国从来没有看过。这些蔬菜像微型卷心菜，称为“抱子甘蓝”，通常缩写为“芽”。 昨天我在我的花园里收获了今季节第一批新芽。
没去旅游而选择留在家里的最好的事情之一，那就是我可以自己做饭，不必靠别人替我做饭。生活在英国，我特别幸运，因为有一种蔬菜，我在中国从来没有看过。这些蔬菜像微型卷心菜，称为“抱子甘蓝”，通常缩写为“芽”。 昨天我在我的花园里收获了今季节第一批新芽。
One of the best things about not traveling, but staying at home is that I can cook for myself, not rely on others to cook for me. Living in England, I am especially lucky, because here we have a vegetable that I have never come across in China. These vegetables are like miniture cabbages, they are called 'brussel sprouts', often shortened to 'sprouts'. Yesterday I harvested my first crop of sprouts from my garden.
写得很好！
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