30天中文写作挑战 (5/30) - 我的套房
现在我住在巴黎附近，所以租房很贵。
我和我朋友住在两间屋子的套房。
一间屋子是厨房和客厅。我喜欢做饭但是我没有时候。有一张大的桌子和很几凳子， 所以很方便对朋友邀请。
我们有一个电视机，可是我们不太看看了。我宁用我的电脑。书架有很多书， 因为我爱好看书。
第二的屋子是的卧房。双人床拿几乎地方。也有小的浴室。
我希望快可以搬去到三间屋子的套房。久后，我要住在房子跟花园。
Today is day 5 of my writing challenge. Thank you in advance for your corrections ! Here the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
Right now I live near Paris, so renting a flat is very expensive. My friend and I are living in a two-rooms apartment. The first room is composed of the kitchen and the living room. I like to cook but I don’t have enough time to do so. There is a big table and several stools, so it is very convenient when we invite friends over. We have a television set, but we don’t watch it a lot. I prefer to use my computer. The book shelf is full of books, because I love to read books. The second room is a bedroom. The double bed takes almost all of the space. There is also a small bathroom. I hope that we will be able to move soon to a three rooms apartment. In the future, I want to live in a house with a garden.
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现在我住在巴黎附近，所以租房很贵。
我和我朋友住在两间屋子的套房。
一间屋子是厨房和客厅。我喜欢做饭但是我没有时候。有一张大的桌子和很几凳子， 所以很方便对朋友邀请。
我们有一个电视机，可是我们不太看看了。我宁用我的电脑。书架有很多书， 因为我爱好看书。
第二的屋子是的卧房。双人床拿几乎地方。也有小的浴室。
我希望快可以搬去到三间屋子的套房。久后，我要住在房子跟花园。
我现居巴黎附近，因此房租很贵。我和我的朋友住在一室一厅的套房：厨房，客厅，我喜欢做饭但我没有时间做。在客厅里，有一张大桌子和几张凳子，很方便用来邀请朋友。客厅里有一个电视机，但我们现在不经常看了。我宁愿用我的电脑。还有一个书架，上面放着很多书。因为我爱看书。
我们还有一间卧室，一张双人床几乎占据了全部空间。还有一个小浴室。
我希望以后能够很快搬到两室一厅的套房。以后，我要住在一个带花园的房子里面。
Il y a des différences entre "logement chinois" et "logement français". La cuisine et le séjour ne se composent pas de chambres. Par exemple, si on dit T4 en français, peut-être ça veut dire que dans cet appartement, il y a une cuisine, 3 chambres. Mais en Chine, pour les chambres, la cuisine et le séjour, ça ne se compose pas. Je ne sais pas si je l'ai expliqué clairement.
Pour les mots de quantité, ça, c'est vraiment difficile pour ceux qui apprennent le chinois, tu as bien fait, pour "一张桌子"！ Pour les autres, il faut les retenir par cœur. Par exemple, 一张床，一本书，一头牛，一匹马 etc
J'apprécie ton idée de donner une version anglaise pour expliquer ce que tu voulais dire et pour ceux qui te corrigent de mieux comprendre ton idée. Mais je te conseil d'écrire en chinois d'abord et après de le traduire en français, c'est mieux pour lapprendissage d'une langue étrangère. Mais si tu as déjà fait comme ça, continue! Si j'ai fait des erreurs grammaticaux dans l'écrit en français, est-ce que tu peux me corriger? Merci beaucoup!!!
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30天中文写作挑战 (5/30) - 我的套房
现在因为我现在住在巴黎附近，所以租房很贵。因为……所以……，In English,it's wrong to use "because" and "so" together,but in Chinese they are usually used together.我和我朋友住在有两间屋子的套房里。
一间屋子是厨房和客厅。虽然我喜欢做饭，但是我没有时候时间亲自来做。Like "because" and "so","although" and "but" are usually used together.因为那里有一张大的桌子和很几几个凳子， 所以很方便对朋友邀请邀请朋友到家中做客。
我们有一个台电视机，可是我们不太看看常看它了。我宁用更喜欢用我的电脑。书架上有很多书， 是因为我爱好看书。I think making this sentence like"因为我爱好看书，所以书架上有很多书"is better.
第二的间屋子是的卧房室。双人床拿几乎占了全部地方。那里也有一个小的浴室。
我希望快可以快点搬去到三间屋子的套房里。久后，我要住在房子跟花园。在将来，我想住在一个带花园的房子里。
I want to say some my idea.Chinese isn't a very rigorous language.When I correct your article,I just do it by reading it.If I read it comfortably,I think it must be right.
And there is no change of verbs in Chinese.Such as "work,worked,working,to work,works"(French is more complex,I think[emoji]),in Cinese just "工作".So when the book of history was damaged,Chinese can just get history by their own viewpoint.
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30天中文写作挑战 (5/30) - 我的套房
（因为）我住在巴黎附近，所以（房租）很贵。（It's fine to use 因为...所以... at the same time in Chinese）我和我朋友住在（有）两间屋子的套房（里）。
一间屋子是厨房和客厅。我喜欢做饭但是我没有（时间）。（屋里）有一张大的桌子和（几个）凳子， 所以（邀请朋友）很方便。
我们有一个电视机，可是我们不（常看）。我宁（愿）用我的电脑。书架有很多书， 因为我爱好看书。
第二（间）屋子是的卧房。双人床（几乎占据所有）地方。（这间屋）也有小的浴室。
我希望（可以快点）搬去到三间屋子的套房。（不）久后，我要住在（带有花园的）房子（里）。（在...里，在...外，"在" is usually conbined with "里,外,前,后".）
Today is day 5 of my writing challenge. Thank you in advance for your corrections ! Here the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
Right now I live near Paris, so renting a flat is very expensive. My friend and I are living in a two-rooms apartment. The first room is composed of the kitchen and the living room. I like to cook but I don’t have enough time to do so. There is a big table and several stools, so it is very convenient when we invite friends over. We have a television set, but we don’t watch it a lot. I prefer to use my computer. The book shelf is full of books, because I love to read books. The second room is a bedroom. The double bed takes almost all of the space. There is also a small bathroom. I hope that we will be able to move soon to a three rooms apartment. In the future, I want to live in a house with a garden.
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30天中文写作挑战 (5/30) - 我的套房
现在我住在巴黎附近，所以房租很贵。我和我朋友住在两间房间的套房。
一间房间是厨房，另一间客厅。我喜欢做饭但是我没有时间。有一张大的桌子和几个凳子， 所以邀请朋友很方便。
我们有一台电视机，可是我们不太经常看。我宁用我的电脑。书架有很多书， 因为我爱好看书。
第二的屋子是的卧房。双人床几乎占满了空间。还有一个小的的浴室。
我希望快可以搬去到三间房间的套房。不久后，我要住有花园的房子
Today is day 5 of my writing challenge. Thank you in advance for your corrections ! Here the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
Right now I live near Paris, so renting a flat is very expensive. My friend and I are living in a two-rooms apartment. The first room is composed of the kitchen and the living room. I like to cook but I don’t have enough time to do so. There is a big table and several stools, so it is very convenient when we invite friends over. We have a television set, but we don’t watch it a lot. I prefer to use my computer. The book shelf is full of books, because I love to read books. The second room is a bedroom. The double bed takes almost all of the space. There is also a small bathroom. I hope that we will be able to move soon to a three rooms apartment. In the future, I want to live in a house with a garden.
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30天中文写作挑战 (5/30) - 我的套房
现在我住在巴黎附近，所以租房房租很贵。
我和我的朋友住在一厅一厨一室的两间房子的套房。
一间屋子是厨房和客厅。我喜欢做饭，但是我没有时候时间。有一张大的桌子和很几几个凳子，朋友来了也很方便。 所以很方便对朋友邀请。
我们有一个台电视机，可是我们不太看看了不太常看，因为我用电脑的时间多我宁用我的电脑。书架上有很多书， 因为我爱好看书。（因为我爱看书，所以书架上摆了很多书。）
第二的屋子是的卧房。双人床拿几乎地方。也有小的浴室。
我希望快可以搬去到三间屋子的套房。久后，我要住在房子跟花园。（我们的卧室放了一张双人床，带有浴室，地方就很小了，我希望尽快搬到有两间卧室的房子。不久后，我应该可以住到大房子里还带有花园。）希望可以帮助到你.
Today is day 5 of my writing challenge. Thank you in advance for your corrections ! Here the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
Right now I live near Paris, so renting a flat is very expensive. My friend and I are living in a two-rooms apartment. The first room is composed of the kitchen and the living room. I like to cook but I don’t have enough time to do so. There is a big table and several stools, so it is very convenient when we invite friends over. We have a television set, but we don’t watch it a lot. I prefer to use my computer. The book shelf is full of books, because I love to read books. The second room is a bedroom. The double bed takes almost all of the space. There is also a small bathroom. I hope that we will be able to move soon to a three rooms apartment. In the future, I want to live in a house with a garden.
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