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Travel to Nan’ao
I love traveling. Traveling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world.
I like the ocean and laying on the beach,I like lying on the beach but I’m always busying for one cause reason or another. In During my summer vacation this year,I went to Nan’ao in the end. (This is correct, but I think what you were going for is 'towards the end' or 'at the end') It is a nice place that have has a beach and sunshine.
Nan’ao is a place that have has many trees and a high mountain.Moreover,there are many kindstudents of residents.We have a great conversations.I felt that they were they are so pure and hospitable.What we took make made me feel better.
There are lots of delicious foods,such as crab,prawn,shellfish, and all types of seafood.And I had a big meals.
After the lunch,I changed into my beach shorts.I walked on the beach,played games, and swam in the sea. And I also lie ashore,for to feeling the warmth of the sun,glowing upon my skin. At During that time, I think thought everything is unimportant and I’m I fell asleep.Although I felt tired,I was happy because we really had a good time.
To sum it up, you'll be sure to experience many new things when traveling. You don't even need a tour guide if you long for more freedom. Just don't forget to bring your backpack!Great job. It sounds like you had a wonderful end to your summer vacation. I hope the corrections help.
0 votedJune 1, 20163delicious Chinese food.
I ate potatoes and chilli for my lunch at noon. The way to make this dish is to cut the potatoes and chillies into slices, and fry them together with salts, soy and vinegar. The procedure is very simple. I think everyone in the world can cook. It is also a typical delicious Chinese food. Did Have you ever tasted it? Let me know.Again, very good. Keep up the good work!
0 votedJune 1, 20161Animal
Releasing alive animals are seems to be a kind of sympoathy. (Or just seems to be sympathetic) That It shows that you like and protect creatures which lives in the world. They are existence exist just like human beings. I saw a group of people gathering in the park to release buckets of fish into the river. They hope all of the fish can live well. But On the other side of the river, there are many adults, especially seniors going fishing. There is the totally contrary This is an entirely contradictory situation. Maybe the released fish has have gone into the fishing men's buckets. (Or fishing man's bucket, if singular) I do not want to critised criticize anything but this sounds wierd.Great job! I Hope the corrections help.
0 votedJune 1, 20161- A combination of those two would work - "Be a member of our restaurant loyalty card program." For advertising purposes, I typically run across a statement that prompts the reader to take an action such as: "Ask about our restaurant loyalty card program!" "Don't forget to join our restaurant loyalty card program!" "Join our restaurant loyalty card program today!"0 votedJune 1, 20160
self-introduction
Hi I'm an applicant who loves Ratatouille and baguettes.
I think that I have 3 capabilities[|keɪpə|bɪləti] that Le cordon bleu requires. (If this is the school, you will want to capitalize all three words in the name, Le Cordon Bleu).
First, it's a is my ability to communicate. communication abilitiy. As a step (student) in an English institution, I could improve the student communication skills by undertaking counsel affairs for coaching/mentoring/tutoring students.
Second, it's career is my experience. I specialized in European in a university. I specI ally had with a special interests in French culture, so I attended classes relating related to france.
Also I've falled I fell in love with French cuisine since after I finished a short language traning course in France.
I oftenly looked for French restaurants and make some simple French cuisine for my family.
Third, it's a is character. I'm meticulous and quick to handle things.
For example, I worked as a research assistant in at the Institute of International Maritime Affairs, where I undertook managing the homepage and assisting with international conferences.
I undertook a task to manage a homepage and to assist in international conferences .I get basis capabilities through various experiences. I haved gained my abilities through varied experiences, and now I want to develop the food culture of Korea by promoting the attitude that French cooks have. ( I mean In Korea there are a bunch of many restaurants, but I'm not sure how many cooks make dishes having with prides.
It is an essential attitude to have prides in their foods in order to develop korean food as global cuisines. )
Great job! I hope the corrections help.
0 votedJune 1, 20160- It is used to identify a person quoting/referring to something they have said or whoever they are speaking to has said previously/ in the past. Typically it predicates an idiom. A helpful way to think about it is to add an imaginary 'always' or 'usually' For example 'As I (always) say, "Mind over matter. If you don't mind, it doesn't matter." 'As you (usually) say "Whatever floats your boat."0 votedMay 30, 20161
