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Travel to Nan’ao I love traveling. Traveling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world. I like ocean and beach.I like lying on the beach.But I’m always busying for one cause or anther. In my summer vacation this year,I went to Nan’ao in the end.A nice place that have beach and sunshine. Nan’ao is a place that have many tree and high mountain.Moreover,there are many kind residents.We have a great conversation.I felt they are so pure and hospitable.What we took make me feel better. There are lots of delicious food,such as crab,prawn,shellfish,all types of seafood.And I had a big meal. After the lunch,I changed into my beach shorts.I walked on the beach,played games,swam in the sea.And I lie ashore,for feeling the warmth of the sun,glowing upon my skin.At that time,I think everything is unimportant and I’m asleep.Although I felt tired,I was happy because we really had a good time. To sum up,You'll be sure to experience many new things when traveling. You don't even need a tour guide if you long for more freedom. Just don't forget to bring your backpack!

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Travel to Nan’ao

I love traveling. Traveling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world.
I like the ocean and laying on the beach,I like lying on the beach but I’m always busying for one cause reason or another. In During my summer vacation this year,I went to Nan’ao in the end. (This is correct, but I think what you were going for is 'towards the end' or 'at the end') It is a nice place that have has a beach and sunshine.
Nan’ao is a place that have has many trees and a high mountain.Moreover,there are many kindstudents of residents.We have a great conversations.I felt that they were they are so pure and hospitable.What we took make made me feel better.
There are lots of delicious foods,such as crab,prawn,shellfish, and all types of seafood.And I had a big meals.
After the lunch,I changed into my beach shorts.I walked on the beach,played games, and swam in the sea. And I also lie ashore,for to feeling the warmth of the sun,glowing upon my skin. At During that time, I think thought everything is unimportant and I’m I fell asleep.Although I felt tired,I was happy because we really had a good time.
To sum it up, you'll be sure to experience many new things when traveling. You don't even need a tour guide if you long for more freedom. Just don't forget to bring your backpack!


Great job. It sounds like you had a wonderful end to your summer vacation. I hope the corrections help.

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