Is this OK, 'You can make a loyalty card in our restaurant'?
Or is it better to say 'Be a member of our restaurant'?

Thanks!

Question

Is this OK, 'You can make a loyalty card in our restaurant'?
Or is it better to say 'Be a member of our restaurant'?

Thanks!

Answer

Make sure to take advantage of our loyalty card

Answer

A combination of those two would work - "Be a member of our restaurant loyalty card program."

For advertising purposes, I typically run across a statement that prompts the reader to take an action such as:
"Ask about our restaurant loyalty card program!"

"Don't forget to join our restaurant loyalty card program!"

"Join our restaurant loyalty card program today!"

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