Hi, I read that part of essay and actually wrote a bunch of things after seeing your questions. But I found it's very hard to make my logic stand because I don't really know much about "public art". So I'm going to put a few suggestions here instead. I think "circular" is likely to mean "countinuing" here in terms of time. But it probably also implys the flow in the interactions between the art work and the public. Like the work influences the public and the public does the other way around. About "assimilation", I found that one of the meanings "the social process of absorbing one cultural group into harmony with another" fits better in the context here. But to say the reason, I could only tell you that what I feel is like the public actions/performance and the art work begin to communicate. And the public certainly takes some message from the art work, then does their own interpretation, and then adds some more depth into the original art work by "circular" interactions. That is the "absorption". But after that you have "harmony" as a result, since the relationship of the art work and the public is closer then. On a short reading, anything I think could be wrong (please don't mind). And I hope I could explain better...

The demand for a product is influenced by the price of related products.

The professor has discussed that the demand for a product is influenced by the price of related products. There are two kinds of related products: substitute goods and compliment goods.

Substitute goods are products that are similar enough to replace each other. For example, butter and margarine can be substituted by each other. When the price of butter is increased and becomes less affordable, people would buy margarine instead, and then demand of margarine will go up. Compliment goods are products that (are compliment or ) are used in pair. For example, CD and CD player are compliment products, and they can’t be used without each other. When the price of CD goes up, there will be fewer people to buy it, and then the demand of CD player will decrease.

Hi, Xiufang! 经济课，不错哟。语法上应该没有什么大错。我稍微改了下一些用语，让文章读起来更自然。另外，我觉得button（纽扣）应该是butter（黄油）？这样它和人造黄油（Margarine）是替代品更靠谱些。Hope my correction helps!

Diary of my life in Canada　May 10

I'm getting tired these days...because I have to find a new house before the end of this week!
I have/got no time.

But I'm sure I can get a new house.
So I'm gonna visit a new house tomorrow and in the weekend.

I also tried a new house today. But the house is (in) too far from the the nearest station.
(So) That's why I didn't choose the house.

Today, I met an athlete !! I was really happy when I met him because he is famous in Japan, and he has a really really really brave heart.
I have no idea whether they know him or not. (They = other people?)
He won an Olympic title and got a gold or silver medal for it? (I'm not sure whether he got a gold or a silver.)

I also wanna be such strong or "a strong person like him") !!!!!

Hi, Hiromi. Hope my correction helps you!

My month of May

I am a professional musician from Rio de Janeiro (and). During the days of May my schedule was too busy, because I was on tour accompanying a singer since 4th till the last weekend of the month in many shows (dates) for the Southeast region of my country.

Therefore, I've been out of home in the majority of days untill the end of these gigs. And they didn't allow me to do other activities that require some preparation time like studying English or music. I'm not complaining, of course! This is my job and I love what I do. But, basically, what I means is: when the tour is finished, I will have time to plan better.

Hi, Péricles. Hope my correction helps!

The sound of silence ♥

When you realise that you live at this time when everything is ''ended'' and you can't do anything (about it) , and that you are alone with your toughts and the existence is the only thing you have.. you are disappointed. You don't want news. You hate everything which is happening around you.. But it's not that bad, because instead you have (lots of) days and nights for thinking. You will realise what you want and what you need to be happy ! You don't have/ bother with others' opinions around , so you can be calm!

Sometimes it's better to be alone .. I don't say that you must be alone your whole life but you need to be awhile.. Trust me when you are 19 years old you can't share everyone's opinion and your life looks like anarchy!

Sometimes you don't realise that you do things that you don't like to do ! Sometimes you can listen the silence that is pure , that lives inside you ! It must be real, it must be in your dreams! We need to listen to our hearts sometimes but not always ! And this sometimes is now -when you want to die!( or "when you are desperate") The only thing that makes you hurt is your turbidity/ambiguity/hesitation.. And you need to re-build your dreams.. You need to reach your goals ! 

-You need to touch the sky and never think that something is ended ! Just feel the future ♥♥

Hi, Salome! What a well-written article it is. Just pay some attention to your use of punctuations and choices of separating sentences. With some more coherence, the article will read much better! 

Cheers.

Job application (2/2)

One of my greatest strengths is that I am very proactive. Due to my serious way of working, I don't hesitate to take the initiative when it is necessary. English is not one of my natural strengths, but now I'm working hard on it to become proficient in english. I'm feeling that it is something I will (can) do well.

Another of my strengths is my organizational skills. I have a good sense of how people and resources need to be organized in order to meet goals. Actually, when I was a student, I used to be a high-level athlete. I followed my engineering classes while I was training 10 times a week. (Or you may say: " I managed to succeed in my engineering classes while I was training 10 times a week." Such way you could better emphasize your skill.)

Hi, Robin! Hope my correction and suggested use of vocab can help you.

Windows 10 (edited)

 Microsoft announced that they would launch a stupid campaign to make/prompt people/the users (to)* upgrade their computers to Windows 10 at at least three time points - on 10 May, 10 June and 10 July. I finally installed Windows because the latest campaign was just too dreadful. They tried to make my computer upgrade without permission. The same thing (to) happened here and there. A lot of people disliked it, but the company still seem(ed) to be doing similar things. I didn't want to deal with their schemes any more. That was why I decided to install Windows 10.

*add "to" if "prompt" is used

The upgrade itself was easy. It only took about two hours. Everything finished while I was doing some chores. All the applications and other files stayed exactly the same. But the problem was that my three-year-old computer has got really slow. Plus, it was a bit hard to read Japanese letters, even though everything - letters, icons, application windows, and any other things (shown) on the display - got much bigger. I soon understood why the supplier could't guarantee that the new OS work well on my model. After I changed a lot of settings, things got better, but since then my computer has  still been rather slow.

I wonder if this means that a three-year-old computer is a bit too old to connect to the Internet/ too old for the Internet. My computer used to work really fast on Windows 7. I really miss it. There are a lot of powerless computers like mine in the world. I wonder if Microsoft wants to get rid of all of them from the Internet./I wonder if MS wants to keep all of them from the Internet.

By the way, in the previous post, I wrote about Windows 10. While I was writing it, a pop-up showed and said, "Do you like Windows 10?" Another pop-up said, "Do you want to recommend Windows 10 to your friends?" while I was talking about the OS on another website. This was just creepy. I really want them to leave me alone.

(I see few problems. Most corrections are for better reading which are also my personal opinion. Good work on the topic! I also had some ****ty moments with Win10 due to the incompatibility of certain drivers. Hope soon MS will stop bothering you~)

What kind of news in the media has the most influence on people?

Nowadays, the main (media to )access to information is (trougt) the internet weaved by/ made up of numerous electronic devices such as smartphones , iPads and laptops. Most (of) teenagers depend on them and they will (only) become more and more sophisticated.

On (the )one hand, we (are )always consult applications for specific purposes. For example, to be up to date. In this case we decide to connect  to the internet to find out the political situation because we are concerned about this topic.

On the other hand, we usually surf the internet  to read news about crimes which happen everyday in our country. Moreover, young people use the internet to meet new people around the world instead of talking to people face to face.

To sum up, using new technologies improves/enhances computers skills. However, some users can become addicted if they spend too much time using computers programs.

Hope my advice helps and let's make friends. (＾ｰ^)ノ