Diary of my life in Canada May 10
I'm getting tired these days...because I have to find a new house until this week!
I have no time.
But I'm sure I can get a new house.
So I'm gonna visit new house tomorrow and weekends.
I also tried a new house today. But the house is in too far from the station where is the nearest.
So that's why I didn't chose the house.
Today, I met a athlete !! I'm glad to met him because he is famous in Japan, and he has a really really really brave heart.
I have no idea whether they know him or not.
He won the Olympic and got a gold? silver? medal .(I'm not sure whether he get a gold ore silver)
I also wanna be a strong!!!!!
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Diary of my life in Canada May 10
I'm getting tired these days...because I have to find a new house before the end of this week!I have/got no time.
But I'm sure I can get a new house.
So I'm gonna visit a new house tomorrow and in the weekend.
I also tried a new house today. But the house is (in) too far from the the nearest station.
(So) That's why I didn't choose the house.
Today, I met an athlete !! I was really happy when I met him because he is famous in Japan, and he has a really really really brave heart.
I have no idea whether they know him or not. (They = other people?)
He won an Olympic title and got a gold or silver medal for it? (I'm not sure whether he got a gold or a silver.)
I also wanna be such strong or "a strong person like him") !!!!!
Hi, Hiromi. Hope my correction helps you!
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